Reviews for Competition
Kimori Takahashi chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
O boy
Can't wait for the next!
Zosime-Nya-Ride chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
That seems really good, but I think it was kind of cut off because I wanted to maybe read a bit more. It's still really good, though!
Deathstarling556 chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
...so did it thrive?
evillullaby6 chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
I loved it
Jayne chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
cute i love it i hope you add to it i would love to read more i cant wait :)
Silversun chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
to my last comment - how can this be one COMPLETE chapter when the end of it demands to continue to another chapter!
Silversun chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
awesome story!
;) can't wait to read what she does! XD

"watch me" it has a nice ring to the story (hand to chin)thinking mode - on

(devious smile)really can wait ;P

well hopefully you will have an idea for the next chapter.
Lairenna chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
I like the idea, it definitely has potential to go further, especially expanding on who this grandfather is and how Kagome and Kyoya end up together.
w e e p i n g-i n d i g o chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
I thought it was creative and entertaining. I would love for you to make another chapter to go along with this one, and add onto Kagome's and kyoya's relationship :)
MoonWatersLight chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
This I'd good! :D
sakemori chapter 1 . 10/5/2012
You should continue it..considering it has a good beginning for a story...I noticed no mistakes of any kind...and everything is perfect. Good job. Now continue it.
Sailorgirl2311 chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Please continue! D I'd love to see this as a story instead of a one-shot!
The Band of Thieves chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
i demand that you make this longer...please i like it and what to know what happens next
ivyknightfire chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I like it. The grammar is good and it works well as a one shot or a chapter story. But I would love To see you make more chapters for the story. :)
1animelover chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
awsome story,please update soon
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