Reviews for Careful
Awareness Bringer chapter 1 . 4/8/2016
Looks a bit short and random at best. No offense intended. Not that I don't find such stories of humans meeting Bionicle or Star Fox characters interesting, I just if I was in this protagonist's shoes, I'd be more convincingly befuddled with an inter-dimensional biomechanical in front of me.
LokaCola chapter 7 . 3/15/2015
Oh, it has been some time now. Another well written chapter, I like how this is all progressing.
dragonsofthe8elements chapter 7 . 1/21/2015
Love the story! Update soon:-)
dragonsofthe8elements chapter 3 . 1/20/2015
I love you.
Silenthunt chapter 6 . 5/16/2012
Great job, keep up the great work, and although Wraith may be a jerk, I like him, he's a very good anti-hero, or is an anti-villain, it can be hard to tell the difference at times.
LokaCola chapter 6 . 4/16/2012
Great chapter, I really enyoyed reading it. Keep up the great work! :)
Jazzyart chapter 5 . 4/9/2012
Hoshi is so cute! I hope you do more with her!
LokaCola chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
Great chapter, keep up the excellent work! :)
Half-Angel-Writer chapter 5 . 3/31/2012
Ya know... Hoshi means Star in Japanese. Nice chapter though... At least Dave has a friends/pet.
LokaCola chapter 4 . 3/18/2012
Really great chapter, keep up your excellent work! :)
Jazzyart chapter 3 . 3/12/2012
Whoa, joining makuta, how will this turn out!.
Half-Angel-Writer chapter 3 . 3/9/2012
Whoa WTF? Joining Makuta? thats a new one... you weren't kidding about a cliffy
LokaCola chapter 3 . 3/9/2012
Great chapter! I actually thought it would turn out the other way, but I was kinda surprised there. Keep up the good work! :)
Half-Angel-Writer chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
nice chapter... gives enough info but holds back on most of it... can't wait for the next chapter!
LokaCola chapter 2 . 2/27/2012
I like what I've read so far, nice chapter. Keep up the good work! :)
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