Reviews for Out of Sight Out of Heart
Bicky Monster chapter 4 . 7/12/2012
Well written, could hardly tell that English isn't your first language. There were a couple of small mistakes, but nothing much. I completely forgot to keep track of them however, so apologies for not being able to send you corrections.
Love the story, not a pairing a usually read, but well worth the time.
SpiderRealm chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
That was a lovely ending! *claps happily*
SpiderRealm chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
I hope Harry lets Charlie in his life again! *grins*
SpiderRealm chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
When I was reading this, I forgot that this had more chapters! I was all like, "What! No, there's better be more!"! xDD
Mickey chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
Loved it
echo chapter 1 . 5/29/2012
good but you need a beta.
Lientjuhh chapter 4 . 5/27/2012
I liked it.. Well done.. :D I love such story's but sometimes people rush it to write it and it comes sloppy out it.. Yours wasn't sloppy...

But I would have reacted different.. :D Perhaps I am spoiled to the story's were harry doesn't forgive compleetly.. :D
Gracealma chapter 4 . 5/22/2012
Love the story. Plot was good. Good character development. Only

question I have. Did Harry forgive Molly for keeping the letters from Charlie?
safa56bmc chapter 4 . 5/11/2012
molly really needs to learn how to stay out of other ppl's business..a happy ending..perfect..
Psycho just doesn't cover it chapter 4 . 5/5/2012
Really sweet, really funny, kinda sad. I love it. Charlie needs someone and who better then Harry. Plus Teddy needs a friend/brother. Loved this story and the plot. :)
The Lazy Princess chapter 4 . 4/27/2012
So sweet... there is other words for this slash/ story... so awesome.

Well including heartaches, the babies and the kids(later on), so cute.

To tell u the truth I am a sucker for Mpreg and the kids born from it.

Well quite a shock to Weasley's had when Charlie revealed to the Family being the kid's father, fav scene though quite critical point but was well written.
solomon chapter 4 . 4/24/2012
Good story When can we look forward to your new story?
Anon chapter 1 . 4/23/2012
Very good story. However you kept using 'weeding' instead of 'wedding'. Weeding is something you do in a garden. Wedding is a marriage ceremony. I would strongly recommend finding a beta reader. You have a great story but you need someone to check behind you to catch the spelling errors that computer programs will not pick up. Like weeding instead of wedding. Weeding is spelled correctly so the computer doesn't flag it. But, again, it was a really great story and I hope to read more of your work in the near future.
917brat chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
hahaha that last part in the end ask your pappa it was his idea was really brillint of fact this entire story is completely brillint and I so loved it. I wished there were more stories, and paring, out like this because it was tottally awsome.
DramoSkye chapter 4 . 4/23/2012
Good story. Interfering mothers can obviously be a bit much at times. Love when you put Charlie on the spot at the end.
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