Reviews for My Sunset
celticvampriss chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Loved this. Thought it was beautiful and loved the imagery. Perfect little one-shot. Great job. _
Theresalynnee chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I do believe this is the first story that has ever literally brought tears to my eyes. Everything...gah. This was absolutely beautiful. Like an artist simply painting a sunset with words. Lovely, absolutely amazing.
uzumaki misaki chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Awesome! What a beautiful story!
j1ack chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Non-cannon couples are generally difficult to convincingly get to fall in love, but I think you did it rather well. The only problem that I have is when the Doctor absorbed the heart of the TARDIS. Margaret turned into an egg, Rose almost died, and the Doctor was forced to regenerate when he absored the heart of the TARDIS last time. Why did it not have an effect this time? Besides that, you had good punctation, grammar, and spelling. Overall, this was a pretty good fic, keep up the good work!