Reviews for My Sweet Variable
Ailee H chapter 7 . 12/17/2013
Damn. Another turn.
Ailee H chapter 4 . 12/17/2013
Awww, poor Bella. And Edward.
Ailee H chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
Liking this so far. Something new.
TWIce as nice chapter 18 . 12/16/2013
That was a terrific story! Brilliant! If you didn't really know what you were talking about, you did a fuck-awesome job faking it! Totally impressive!

Thanks so much for sharing with me and the other humble readers!
TWIce as nice chapter 11 . 12/16/2013
"Oh my God. Would it be weird to say thank you?"

That has got to be one of the best lines I've ever read! How honest and sweet he is! I love him!
fatpotatoe chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
Fantastic story.
DJUBS chapter 2 . 12/15/2013
Amazing! I've read a lot of FF but this is different... cant wait to see were this goes...
smellofpaw chapter 18 . 12/15/2013
This is brilliant in everywhich way! Thank you so much and I hope you continue to gift us with your stories :-)
Heatherl8367 chapter 8 . 12/15/2013
Oh my gosh this story is so amazing. Real " edge of your seat" stuff. I'm absolutely loving this. It's brilliant!
StellaBlueBella chapter 18 . 12/14/2013
Such a great read! I don't read much anymore, sad but true. Your fic captured my attention, my imagination and made me make time. I like how you ended this. Not everything is so neatly resolved. I still wonder what Edward was thinking about during some scenes. Aro's fate. Heck all their fates. How much Carlisle Esme and Charlie knew or didn't know. ExB's long term chances. All nicely left to the readers imagination. This read like a movie. And was more believable than many I've seen. Thanks for sharing it with us.
evilnat chapter 17 . 12/13/2013
Wow. I didn't expect that with aro, but not surprised either.

But first, FINALLY! Not just the lemon but them just confessing how they feel, that has been a LONG time coming! He lemon was just a bonus!

Aro is a horrible man and I sure hope they know what they are doing if they go back. They could just stay away and let him take the glory and riches. But I guess it's not the right thing to do, but it is afar to go back, they could still be killed by him or something.

evilnat chapter 16 . 12/13/2013
Oh no! What is it? All that hassle and work and now he thinks he's made a mistake? Thank god I've got the next chapter to flick to to find out coz if be going crazy if I didn't.

I love that Carlisle helped and he knew what was going on (sort of). And that maybe Edward does have a family, even if he never realised.

Heatherl8367 chapter 3 . 12/13/2013
I love these two. This Edward is quickly worming himself right into my heart.

And what's this polymer? Hmmmm
Heatherl8367 chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
This is so amazing. I'm just loving this!
Heatherl8367 chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
Wow, what a brilliant start! I'm totally intrigued.
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