Oh that's funny. Reading your AN its nic eto know I wasn't alone. I totally thought of Lost. I think because the word "hatch" is so rarely used that Lost took it over. I'm really enjoying this story and I have this feeling I discovered a new novel, I can tell I will probably try to finish tonight though. This may be bad.

The hatch! This is so much fun.

This is so intriguing.

What an interesting different little story! I really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing!

So, so good! You are so talented. Are you writing anywhere else these days?

Such a great, unique, complicated and clever story.
Loved it.
Thank you so much.
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Love the Granma Swan's modesty vs hump pillow discussion.
Inspired...and an excellent point: morning boners are not a recent invention.
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This was wonderful.
And so is Plummy's Shipyard and Love in Idleness...good call on the recs.
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That last guest review was me. Logged in now.
Brilliant stuff. Loving these characters and kind of stunned how completely I've accepted this whole premise without the slightest issues of morality or probability.
Such a sweet , tender first kiss.
For teenage assassins.
Lol
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I've just found this story. Yeah, I know; What the hell was I thinking.
It's brilliant , original and intriguing. Cannot wait or see where we're going with this.
Such a departure from your other stories.
You're very talented.
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This was amazing. The story was riveting and hard to put down- I just needed to know what happened next! Seriously, amazing.

Truly loved this amazing story! Its the best story I've read since I read Divergent earlier this year. I feel thankful I was able to read it for free online but I would've been just as happy with the story even if I paid full price. That's saying something coming from cheapy me. LOL Looking forward to reading more of your online stories & in the future if you happen to become published. :)

thank you!

That was great! So glad I finally got around to reading. :0)

Oh my lord. I loved this story. It wasn't what I had expected when I started it. It blow me away with how easy it was too read and get through, finished it in about 2 hours? Ha. Thanks. Awesome read.