Reviews for My Sweet Variable |
---|
denverpopcorn chapter 1 . 1/21/2012 wow. your writing has tightened up considerably and the plot? it's excellent. i'm already hooked. can't wait to see where you take this. you know i'm not good at "feedback" but this is because you don't need it. you have an excellent support team, as always. glad you're back! cheers, d. |
raizie chapter 1 . 1/21/2012 Oh no, angst. Well, it's quite different than anything I've read before, so I'm intrigued to see where it goes. |
MeilleurCafe chapter 1 . 1/21/2012 Very intriguing premise. I really like how this starts off. When I finished the chapter, for some reasons my mind jumped to an epilogue many years down the road for Edward and Bella. What kind of future could these two have, regardless of whether it's separate or apart? No matter, though; I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the meantime. I'm very glad to read a new fic by you - you're a phenomenally talented writer. I enjoy your stories very much. Serendipitous/MeilleurCafe |