| Reviews for My Sweet Variable |
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   mysticfighter111 chapter 18 . 12/22/2013 Whew *wipes brow* - what aride. This is an awesome story and I admire how you pulled all the scientific "stuff" together to make sense for us readers and intertwined it with the teen-agent-plot and Bella and Edward'd love-story. Thank you. Happy Holidays |
| doodlehound chapter 18 . 12/21/2013 Really enjoyed reading this. Would be a great movie, don't you think? :) |
| Rita01tx chapter 18 . 12/21/2013 OMG! You had me sittin' on the edge of my seat, bitin' my nails to shreds LOL! What a fabulously devious and convoluted story, not to mention the more than excitin' HEA! Any chance of a futuretake to see how our kids get on with a "normal" life? |
| evilnat chapter 18 . 12/20/2013 I have been putting of reviewing this chapter for about two weeks. I just can't bring myself to admit it's over. What an excellent story, so amazingly written and so original. And the ending was just perfect. I love all your stories and am so thankful for you sharing them with us. Xx |
| Denny52 chapter 18 . 12/19/2013 Really terrific. Sucked me right in and the end was everything I hoped it would be. Loved that they could now live like normal kids, as amazing as they are. Great work and thanks. |
| iamsocrazy chapter 18 . 12/19/2013 Loved it. Well done and very entertaining! Never knew where it would go! |
| Denny52 chapter 14 . 12/18/2013 Holy Shit. |
| Denny52 chapter 12 . 12/18/2013 There really is an underlying sadness with this story and these two. They're just kids, very intelligent teenagers, living adult lives way too early and without the care free innocence they should be experiencing. Edward seems to wear the guilt a bit heavier than Bella but they both carry that burden and feel it constantly. It's sad. That last word Bella coined for them said it all, "redemption". You're did a great job with this story and your characters. Now I'm on to the next chapter. No making Christmas cookies tonight. |
| Burntcore chapter 18 . 12/18/2013 Oh wow - what a great wrap up. I don't read a lot of Twi fanfic anymore, but I still kept tabs on this one. Sad to see it end but what a great way to complete it. :) |
| Denny52 chapter 8 . 12/18/2013 God, this is so good. I'm so glad I waited till it was complete or it would have driven me crazy. You certainly has a flair for intrigue and suspense. Great job and imagination. |
| cheltivia chapter 18 . 12/18/2013 I loved this from beginning to end... the suspense was enough and it keep me on edge... great job |
| Ailee H chapter 18 . 12/17/2013 Wow. Amazing. I've passed this story too many times but did not read it. I saw the rec on Ms. Swan's Bookstore and decided to give this a chance. I repeat: Wow. Totally something new to read, I never read a plot like this before. I was confused sometimes but managed to catch up. Good job and thank you for sharing! |
| Ailee H chapter 14 . 12/17/2013 The last sentence though. :-( |
| Ailee H chapter 12 . 12/17/2013 Damn. I'm still confused. But I do know Aro is up to something real bad. |
| Ailee H chapter 11 . 12/17/2013 Awwwwwwwwww these two. |