Reviews for My Sweet Variable
renewagain chapter 18 . 1/26
What a great story! complex, detailed and still sweet. I'm so glad I found it (Rochelle Allison recommended). Thank you for writing. I hope you have more?!
renewagain chapter 6 . 1/25
Oh that's funny. Reading your AN its nic eto know I wasn't alone. I totally thought of Lost. I think because the word "hatch" is so rarely used that Lost took it over. I'm really enjoying this story and I have this feeling I discovered a new novel, I can tell I will probably try to finish tonight though. This may be bad.
renewagain chapter 5 . 1/25
The hatch! This is so much fun.
renewagain chapter 3 . 1/25
This is so intriguing.
Nikki1219 chapter 18 . 1/13
What an interesting different little story! I really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing!
ahz chapter 18 . 1/11
So, so good! You are so talented. Are you writing anywhere else these days?
Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 18 . 12/20/2014
Such a great, unique, complicated and clever story.
Loved it.
Thank you so much.
Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 13 . 12/19/2014
Love the Granma Swan's modesty vs hump pillow discussion.
Inspired...and an excellent point: morning boners are not a recent invention.
Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 4 . 12/13/2014
This was wonderful.
And so is Plummy's Shipyard and Love in Idleness...good call on the recs.
Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 3 . 12/13/2014
That last guest review was me. Logged in now.
Brilliant stuff. Loving these characters and kind of stunned how completely I've accepted this whole premise without the slightest issues of morality or probability.
Such a sweet , tender first kiss.
For teenage assassins.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/13/2014
I've just found this story. Yeah, I know; What the hell was I thinking.
It's brilliant , original and intriguing. Cannot wait or see where we're going with this.
Such a departure from your other stories.
You're very talented.
Adelia979 chapter 18 . 10/2/2014
This was amazing. The story was riveting and hard to put down- I just needed to know what happened next! Seriously, amazing.
TwilightJemS chapter 18 . 9/29/2014
Truly loved this amazing story! Its the best story I've read since I read Divergent earlier this year. I feel thankful I was able to read it for free online but I would've been just as happy with the story even if I paid full price. That's saying something coming from cheapy me. LOL Looking forward to reading more of your online stories & in the future if you happen to become published. :)
mo kagen chapter 18 . 9/22/2014
thank you!
TheGreenPanther chapter 18 . 8/4/2014
That was great! So glad I finally got around to reading. :0)
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