Reviews for My Sweet Variable
Gaby-wotnow chapter 10 . 4/20
Yikes this gets more and more mysterious.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 9 . 4/20
I'm so lost now! Re reading this ch.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 7 . 4/20
Damn did it again... Awesome
Moving on
Gaby-wotnow chapter 6 . 4/20
See they can't ever leave! Why her? Hmm
Gaby-wotnow chapter 5 . 4/20
Oh crap! Jeez I clicked next so fats but backed up to leave a review.

Oh crap!
Gaby-wotnow chapter 4 . 4/20
Aww this was somewhat heavy at the end. Tough situation and they're just kids.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 3 . 4/20
Oh damn! I knew that book was something! I'm starting to believe everyone is something! KWIM? Ugh
Gaby-wotnow chapter 2 . 4/20
Wow this is different and intriguing.
I'm wondering if they really allowed to retire. How things will turn out. What the long term assignment is! I'm thinking many things. Lol
jule2 chapter 18 . 4/19
Brilliantly done.
shehazi chapter 18 . 4/18
Thanks you, a great adventure.
Edmazing chapter 18 . 4/6
This was such a good story! I genuinely hope you're still out there writing and getting ready (or already) to publish more for us. You have a gift.

Best wishes,
Edmazing chapter 5 . 4/3
I love how oblivious Bella is to her effect on Edward. Lol
Edmazing chapter 3 . 4/3
I love the connection between these two. It sounds like it's going to be complicated, with the roles and digging down to the reality. And I love the idea of it all.
Edmazing chapter 1 . 4/3
Love your opening. Original ideas that you let the audience piece together. I'm excited.
Guest chapter 18 . 3/27
It just matches with me,you know;somehow I know more than I should and l feel like Bella some times. It's nice to know l'm not all alone in this wide world. However imaginery my friends are. Thanks so much for letting me know. Rabeya, from Bangladesh.
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