Reviews for My Sweet Variable |
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radioactive77 chapter 18 . 12/1/2013 Thanks! |
HollBeth chapter 18 . 12/1/2013 Brilliant. I have extolled praise and I would annoy you to keep repeating it, I'm sure. But this is, simply, brilliant. Intelligent, emotional, sweet, harsh, just everything. Kudos to you for an expertly-crafted story. Thank you! |
cejsmom chapter 18 . 12/1/2013 What a fabulous ending! Incredible really. I'm impressed with Bree - good for her - she wasn't the loose cannon they all worried about. And they lived Happily ever after and I'm perfectly happy with that! |
BruinChick chapter 18 . 12/1/2013 Thank you - terrific ending for a terrific story. |
Seagull83 chapter 18 . 12/1/2013 I absolutely loved this fic. Just brilliant. |
Shamatt0403 chapter 18 . 12/1/2013 Wow! Just amazing. What an incredible ride. Thank you! |
random fanfic writer chapter 17 . 11/27/2013 I may have to read this several times over because I'm missing so much this first time. It's beautifully layered and detailed. I just hope I can handle the dread again and again. Hoping for a HEA (and honestly really thought this was almost over, when really it seems like it's just begun). |
tita cullen chapter 17 . 11/26/2013 I can only assume that you have heard this before but I am going to say it non the less. Your story is outstandingly original and just great. I truly hope someone sees it and publish it. All those people out there that loves romance and suspense need to know that your story exist. I'm one of those people and I can't tell how thankful I am that I'm reading a story with such a plot. I'm always looking for this kind of stories and you just blew me away with your originality. YOU MY DEAR ARE VERY TALENTED |
kelmoore chapter 17 . 11/25/2013 Such a good story! I started again from the beginning, and I'm glad I did. It was even better the second time! |
Avid Reader12 chapter 1 . 11/23/2013 So glad you have more chapters written, can't wait for more. Nice plot twist! |
onlybelieved chapter 17 . 11/18/2013 Why haven't I read this earlier?! it's been on my to be read list for aaages! Do you know when you will update? I cannot wait :) thanks for sharing :) |
brie pls chapter 17 . 11/16/2013 wow. so read this story the whole day and i have to tell you it is amazing! and not just by fanfiction standards in my opinion this could really be published! you cover every base possible and really have the characters down. i would love it and i honestly applaud you for such fine work this is the most tense i have ever been for a story! thank you for writing it! as crazy as that sounds! but honestly, great great fantastic awesome. can't wait for what's to come next! |
steadfast-star chapter 17 . 11/15/2013 Oooh! Dun dun dunnn! How exciting! I loved that they were finally together and free to be themselves! But I agree with what Aro said - I wasn't expecting the chapter to end like that! I'm looking forward to more! Thanks :) |
Nissa-Cullen chapter 17 . 11/15/2013 Son of a b. Yep definitely didn't go according to plan. Well that sucks. There's no way they can can let him get away with making himself rich like that. How'd he manage to do that? How'd he mange to get off scott free like that? Ugh. |
enka3 chapter 17 . 11/14/2013 What a turn of events! I thought that was it for them...nice update! |