Reviews for My Sweet Variable
Gaby-wotnow chapter 18 . 4/21/2016
Omg that was incredible. I kept thinking "that easy?" I like this ending better, but I can't help feeling like I want to read their future. Is this life really done for them?
Thank you! Awesome story. I have to agree with others in that the summary just didn't call to me. I'm glad I read it though. Thank you again.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 16 . 4/20/2016
He can't swim! Ugh float
Gaby-wotnow chapter 12 . 4/20/2016
Wow
This too big for just two kids.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 11 . 4/20/2016
One of my faves. Them just being teens.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 10 . 4/20/2016
Yikes this gets more and more mysterious.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 9 . 4/20/2016
I'm so lost now! Re reading this ch.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 7 . 4/20/2016
Damn did it again... Awesome
Moving on
Gaby-wotnow chapter 6 . 4/20/2016
See they can't ever leave! Why her? Hmm
Gaby-wotnow chapter 5 . 4/20/2016
Oh crap! Jeez I clicked next so fats but backed up to leave a review.

Oh crap!
Gaby-wotnow chapter 4 . 4/20/2016
Aww this was somewhat heavy at the end. Tough situation and they're just kids.
Gaby-wotnow chapter 3 . 4/20/2016
Oh damn! I knew that book was something! I'm starting to believe everyone is something! KWIM? Ugh
Gaby-wotnow chapter 2 . 4/20/2016
Wow this is different and intriguing.
I'm wondering if they really allowed to retire. How things will turn out. What the long term assignment is! I'm thinking many things. Lol
jule2 chapter 18 . 4/19/2016
Brilliantly done.
shehazi chapter 18 . 4/18/2016
Thanks you, a great adventure.
Edmazing chapter 18 . 4/6/2016
This was such a good story! I genuinely hope you're still out there writing and getting ready (or already) to publish more for us. You have a gift.

Best wishes,
Mel
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