Argh! lol I'm so anxious! Damn Aro.

Dang... They just threatened Aro, and he threatened them right back. The war is on!

I know this was in a past chapter but I keep thinking back to the bridge collapse to the island of homesteaders. That wasn't by accident. Who really are those people, and what do they know about what's about to happen? How do they know?

Aro is a narcissist. Evil, creepy, and so very deadly with no feeling for others but himself. I wonder if Mrs. Cope is still "alive" and in the same private ward as bee sting guy.

LOL! Ex-agents are everywhere! It seems they are taking better care of the current Sundial agents than Aro. The secret tunnels, the warnings, etc. OH! I bet Esme and Carlisle are, too. I just hope Aro doesn't put a hit out on them, too.

Poor Mrs. Cope. Aro will unravel but not just yet. He will try to trick B&E and that will be ugly.

OH, no! Mrs. Cope knew this was coming so she made sure to get the pearls so she could take care of the job herself and not have B&E do it. She knew it would hurt them to have to go through with her demise. Aro must have figured out who she was. I bet he's getting the kids to take out all of the old Sundial agents.

I knew it! lol Mrs. Cope is a plant, watching over these two!

I must say that I am so impressed with this story! It would make an exciting movie. Just sayin'!

I had to laugh when Edward and Bella were making out in the stairwell, like he minded doing that! lol Then asking her to wait due to the friction. Cute!

So they go to the basement and he finds a hatch door, but it looks like it's been there for around ten years. wth?! I thought maybe the roadwork was either a diversion for Aro to do something to her house, or someone else did. Has the hatch door been there that long or was it recently put in and made to look old? So many quirky happenstances are coming to light.

Like I said, I don't trust Aro. For him to secretly give Bella the depo shot and tell her afterwards was wrong on so many levels. Is he trying to trap them into staying once they hit the tender age of 19?

Mrs. Cope is part of Volturi, or against them? Maybe a fairy godmother to watch over Bella. lol What a great cover! No matter, I will never trust Aro.

This is really good! I love your imagination. :)

The story sounds very interesting after reading this first chapter. I just hope it isn't too angsty as I just read one that's still killing me! :)

This is so cool! Pardon the 50 yo idiom from a 50 yo!