Reviews for Whirlpool Rising
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22
when danzo had thothut Naruto was out he ws so wong on all of it and when Naruto had win his own home vaillge he name it kand m is mom anddad name on it ,with the money he took his own form his momand dad as will mob money to some he get form the bounyhutherand woking in the badands when he and fuu move into it when she had took over as Queen of it ,naruo had took the last warlord money with him ,and he came to the whipool to buit his own vallge in it and he had do it too ,when it woking it he get the fox simmers too, both the light and hell ones Naruto kown of, he is now on danzo hit lits and then Naruto had find the gold he had to buit his home too,
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21
when Naruto had going out he took his mom and dad money the frimly own scools and art too , some art too ,when in the whlpool Naruto had his own men cave mand into a home and books room too ,some swords he had find and the others he get form the days of hi bounyhuther woking , and a office of his own full of books and swords and other art he get form the mob boss own homes he find , and he took the money too ,
Guest chapter 2 . 3/20
when the war with both susike and danzo was a long one with Naruto he was not let the2 men win and he was more of a thore to the 2 of them . when in home Naruto had a men cave bed room to ueds and it times his little patvle hindout had some wehopans on the wall like ormlas own sword and the other whopes of the aliked too , when in his office Naruto name susike own bother his new rlnd for the job he had and his is the lord of the whipool couny now .
Guest chapter 1 . 3/18
when Naruto and tenten both get marring when the 2 had life in the new vaillge Naruto had buit up with the mob money he took when in the bad lands he and tenten had woking as bounyhuthers and some time gunds for hire too ,when in time he and tenten had sheelp in bed and had sex too when in the old inn he find and he and tenten then get marring too .
Bullshark 213 chapter 2 . 12/25/2016
Why would sakura henged as Hinata ask if his daughters was hers ,knowing that she literally found out she existed a minute before?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Wow but did naruto took care a child

Also please don't make sasuke ex waifs love naruto please

Also good chapter
Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 11 . 5/19/2016
Awesome story! Please update soon.
nine telled cherry blosom 28 chapter 11 . 7/21/2015
omg I can not whit for the next one
nine telled cherry blosom 28 chapter 1 . 7/20/2015
St3rfire- serafina chapter 11 . 5/8/2015
Good story I liked the way. How you explain every detail on the story. I know is been more three years. Since you updated this story. It's a good one. Please update soon. I want to know if Naruto twins are tough to fight. How will win the war.
midnightscar17 chapter 11 . 3/5/2015
Update please
Guest chapter 3 . 11/30/2013
Roxas, are you nuts? I mean the names Sora and Ryuu are fine but Roxas?
61394 chapter 4 . 11/5/2013
this feels more like a sequel then anything else
leafstone chapter 11 . 5/5/2013
great story.
sortofbored chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
Cool story.
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