Reviews for Unlikely Love
Razell chapter 13 . 12/15/2015
And I was hoping that Plato had really changed. But that's the way it often is with abusers, they cry and say they're sorry, that they'll never do it again... And then go right back to it. I think there's something seriously wrong with someone like that, mentally.

I liked how Misto spoke up for him, despite his own feelings for Victoria, because he believed it was right. Sadly, it wasn't right.

I wonder who would be more likely to kill Misto if they found Victoria sleeping in his nest, even if it was innocent, Munk or Plato? Angry father or abusive tomfriend?

The whole rescuing Demeter storyline was great, I didn't expect Alonzo to help, why would he want to go back to that Hell again? Even if it was for a good cause, he was probably too traumatized to face his worthless father again. Using Admetus was interesting, he's one of those cats that either is or isn't their, dependant upon version, and is often Plato. I wonder why he was considered an outcast? And Macavity saving Misto's life, that was a surprise.

Mungojerrie and Rumpleteazer! I wonder if they nicked any of the decorations while cleaning up?
; )

Great story, sad, but hopeful.
Razell chapter 5 . 12/14/2015
Boy, Plato's a jerk. Not nearly as bad as Macavity, but still a bully. Blaming Mistoffelees for the injuries he caused to Victoria trying to hit Misto in the first place.

Mungojerrie and Rumpleteazer! I love those two!

And cute, innocent Mistoffelees. He's a sweet little kitten. He and Alonzo have just had a horrible upbringing by Macavity. And Alonzo being the protective older brother..

Are the other two Tom-Kits you keep mentioning Tumblebrutus and Pouncival?

Great story so far!
Girl in the Tiger Kimono chapter 13 . 8/11/2012
KAWAI! Ney, that was so awesome! I loved the chapters :D
Cordetta chapter 13 . 6/17/2012
Aw! I love Misto and Victoria's friendship throughout this! And then they finally got together! Is it rude to say I want more? I don't want the story to end! It was brilliantly written and honest, whilst still being quite sweet. I didn't like that Misto was always tattling, even though it was for Victoria's own safety, but that's a personal issue rather than a flaw. It makes perfect sense that he did. I especially loved Misto and Victoria's first kiss. But I still have questions! Why did Macavity save Misto? What's going to happen to Plato? And why is the pipe just so darn awesome? Great fanfic once again, I loved it!
eld mcm chapter 13 . 6/3/2012
YAYYYY! Happy ending! I love this story!
Eaglator23 chapter 13 . 6/2/2012
AW! what a good ending?
eld mcm chapter 12 . 4/19/2012
wow...this really is confusing...
eld mcm chapter 10 . 3/15/2012
Misto is very lucky to have a brother like Alonzo! He REALLY needed him this time!

As for Victoria: her mother has spent a month with Mac-(someone hisses)SORRY! and as she said, she has become more sensitive to lies, so I think it's obvious who Vic should choose!
Fankit is lazy chapter 10 . 3/15/2012
That was a really, really good and intriguing chapter! I loved it!
Wombaat chapter 10 . 3/14/2012
I really enjoyed this chapter.

I like that you're starting to show the abusive side of Plato and you're not shying away from the trials that Dem has gone through.

I hope you continue to develop the relationship between Dem and Vic. Maybe have part of Dems recovery the post near rape counseling of Vic or something like that?

Keep it up mate.
eld mcm chapter 9 . 3/14/2012
eld mcm chapter 9 . 3/14/2012
awwww,she is soooo CUTE!

"I will never get used to that..." LOL!
Lunaflora chapter 1 . 2/22/2012
That was the sweetest most wonderful kiss I've ever read. Great job! I look forward to the next chapter!

Oh it so hard to see that Misto is the one?
Cornicula de Infortunium chapter 7 . 2/18/2012
This ended up being so adorable. Victoria really has to stop messing with both tom's feelings. I mean, really Vick. Pick one (*Misto*) and flirt with him and him only. I also can't believe Plato would get so drunk. Can't he resist? Misto did and he's Macavity's son for Heaviside's sake! Lay of the booze, Plato!

Anyway, I do hope Alonzo and Cass becomes mates. It would be awesome. Then, Misto can get a queen of his own. After she splits up with a certain someone, of course. Unles,, you want to make it inetresting and have Misto date Etcy. I wonder if Victoria would be jealous of her? Now, that's a though. All in all, a good chapter. Though, I don't approve of drinking at that age. Especially because Plato's going to feel it in the morning. Hang-overs are not pleasant, Plato. I think he needs a good firm spanking! Enough of my ranting, though. Keep up with the updates! And please let the other kittens start accepting Misto soon. Oh, and one quick curiosity. Where is Jemima in all of this?
Cornicula de Infortunium chapter 5 . 2/14/2012
Oh, dear! Alonzo has learned violent and abusive habits from his father! I hope his growing relationship with Cassandra softens him up a bit. I liked the scene where Cori and Tanto saw the future and the mind-hug. It was nice foreshadowing on your part. Perhaps it has something to do with a certain future love interest? I do hope it does! I wish I knew what they saw, even though I have an inkling. And, on a side-note, Plato is starting to get on my nerves. Why does he have to treat Misto poorly just because he is small, new and gentle? That's rather jerkish. I believe Victoria should dump Plato! It would give him the good humbling he needs! Besides, there are other queens.
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