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Story itself is well written, but plot sucks. this was waste of my time. Doesnt make any sense.

I love it ! Really fun to read !

oh merlin, oh merlin, oh merlin, Oh Merlin, OH MERLIN

Great story ! I loved it !

This was different and wonderful thank you.

One word..

AMAZING!

I wonder if this is just the end or there are more?

I really liked reading this book! It is a very interesting story line.

Yessssss why do I love Draco/Hermione?

I love Draco and Hermione being his close companions, hahaha.

Oh this is COOL

this is written so well

Wow! I truly liked your story. I love the way how you portrait James. A bit dark, political and manipulate. And I like that Marvelo is not the normal dark Lord.

I loved this
It was perfect.

I imagine James have a ball in Japan... The leader at the top tend to be an "Empty Center", or a powerfigurw with no power. Seeing as they're so interdependant, any decition is always a group decition, and they have an intense hate for outside influences...he really has his work cut out for him there... Not to mention how they tend to say 'maybe' when they really mean 'no', because they don't want to hurt peoples feelings and can never manage to be direct. I imagine his methode of taking people to a bar to get drunk will make the negotiations easyer...IF he is capable of adopting their incredible 'you-need-mind-reading-skills-to-understand-people' and tendency to alude vaugely to things and various local custums, and maybe utilize a glamour and alude to japanese ancestory in adittion... It would be an amusing side story if you ever decide to make it. *Chuckles*