Reviews for The Domestic Analysis |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope all these comments all at once aren't annoying Anyways - great start to the fic; loving that I get to dive straight into a sequel / continuation of a story I genuinely enjoyed Thanks for writing! (I will try to comment on every chapter here too, but as it's 2:30am...I may forget or get too sleepy) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic read. Kept me gripped throughout. Read all today. You know the characters so well and I believe that this is how they'd act. Realise you posted this 7 years ago but thought it still nice to share my thoughts. Off to read the sequel now. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww I'm such a sucker for Christmas chapters |
![]() ![]() I really like this story, but I had to point this out. The line I've copied below should use the word convex, not concave. "She sat forward, her legs crossed Indian style and her hands rested on her concave stomach." Concave, having an outline or surface that curves inward like the interior of a circle or sphere. Convex, having an outline or surface curved like the exterior of a circle or sphere. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I swear this fic has me like im watching a soap opera lmao when mycroft showed up I was like DONT YOU DARE MYCROFT STFU! omg u had me on edge lol love this fic |
![]() ![]() Fantastic! Haven't read to the end yet but I'm hooked xx :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Read chapter 4 and I can say I do not hate, not even a little bit! I love the drama and can't wait to see what happens and why he reacted the way he did. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though this story was written almost two years ago, I've only gotten to read it now and I have to say that it was the best decision. I don't know how you do it, but you capture Sherlock's character so well! I've read 6 chapters so far and it's so so so amazing. Can't wait to read more :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bloody brilliant fic. Two thumbs up I laughed, I cried, I screamed... You ARE a Mini Moffat ;) Now onto your next fic... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't handle this! *sobbing uncontrollably* |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO NO NO MOLLY NOTHING CAN HAPPEN TO MY GIRL MOLLY I WILL CRY BUCKETS AND BUCKETS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naughty Irene - so scandalous! There is a tiny part of me that ships them... The canon part of me, I guess. But no. I'm the captain of the Sherlolly ship! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tehehee this is getting good! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't ever apologize for putting drama in a fic. That's what amazing stories are made of. 3 |