No Charlie? No Billy?

Leah is shape shifter right?

Does Bella know Jake? How come she is on the streets?

Hope they find out who she is soon...

Omg! Then Billy must reconize her as Bella. Wonder why she ended up in the streets...

Haha wonder if he finds her fast

Wonder what her reaction will be once she wakes up...

LMFAO! They can act quickly to a vampire but not to a thief? LMFAO!

I absolutely love lfc writing and am EXTREMELY SAD that this take had no further chapters after 31

I'm surprised nobody noticed her unusual reaction to the situation.

It feels like Leah keeps slightly making things worse... Or at least, causing shit situations

Leah continues to be a cunt.

Hoping Bella will start talking to Paul soon

Leah is quite a cunt at times.

I know you are probably not finishing it, but I like most of the story. The pace is killing me though. Everything for poor Bella is one step forward, six steps back. It kinda seems like any progress of helping her to trust the pack is ruined a few paragraphs later. Claudia doesn't really come of as a good girl that is protective of pack and a little jealous and taking it out on Bella. She seems to be genuinely mean hearted. Gleefully hateful is the phrase that pops into my head. To put it simply, shes a twat, I hope she gets bit by a cold one and that the pack decides to off her rathet than attempt to help her be a vegetarian. Poor Seth's natural goodness being paired up with her. I really hope, if you finish this, that someone soon becomes more aware of the extent of Bella's horrible situation and brokenness. It's excruciating to watch them fumble around attempting to help her. I hope soon they can give her the help she needs rather than the help they assume she has me all in my feels and I hope you'll continue writing it.

Awesome story and great writing too! Love the phrases Paul comes out with, freaking hilarious! Would’ve loved to see how things unfolded from here. Was really looking forward to when Bella would start speaking and realised what they are (and what they can kill). Grateful for this much though. Thanks for writing and sharing!