Melody Moonsong chapter 1 . 1/11/2016
Great parody take on the MANY Mary Sue you keep up the awesome work!
fullmoonlonewolf chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
This is beautiful... Just laughing my ass off at this wonderful fic
99% OC Naruto fics can be described like this
nikooruchan21 chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Is it sad enough that this story of yours is the quick and humor version of the one of the most cliche ways getting into the naruto world? Yeah, it is and especially when people think this idea is original. Great job though!
EmpressAND chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
I'm literally dying. This is hilarious. Probably because it's so true!
person chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
NOOOOO why oh why Gaara and Kakashi? WHY?! Just kill the fucking Mary and Sue! Then life will be over 9,000 times better, right?
xlime4 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Haha, this was hilarious XD
Ketsweird chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
This is win
Nikki chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
It was like reading Twilight but better.
FilipinoMatryoshka chapter 1 . 6/21/2012
Best crack fix ever, no wonder Naruto was mentally scar-d
Princess Santa Clause chapter 1 . 5/24/2012

All I can manage to say! xDD

Omfp... Poor Naruto! xDDD
Blurring Fandoms chapter 1 . 3/12/2012
Teehee, I've read things like this, but the writer was serious. Can you believe that? This was funny though. 'Ow, my perfectly toned butt!'
2lazy2thinkofaname chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Haha, poor Naruto!

Oh, and I'm guessing you got this from Tara Gilsbie's story 'Time of Your Life'?
Zoids Fanatic chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Well, you sumed up just about 99% if all Naruto OC stories. You are now considered a sane and awsome writer.
TheAliensDidIt chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Ha! I like this.

Mary and Sue, at the height of their MarySue-ness. What a refreshing fic.
Thunder Krystal chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I died of laughter at the THAT'S THE FIRST THING ONE WOULD THINK OF WHEN SEEING A SCRATCH ON A TREE!... But then I was brought to life again. PLEASE MAKE MORE!
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