Reviews for The Want To Be Loved
Sad and helpful chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I'm sorry but this was a very painful read, you had so many grammatical errors that I couldn't even finish the story:( I bet if you get someone to fix it a lot more people would like it and no I don't me change anything major just spelling errors and wording. for example there was one part you said speak when it should a Been spoke.
Despoina. Tiko-chan chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
Hiiiiiiiiiiii... There is a manga with the name "Aisaretaino", it's the same plot! If your inspiration came from there you did a veeeery good job! If not read "Aisaretaino" to see what i mean! Personally i believe that Draco Malfoy maybe was a better choice? Because of their past as rivals and all! Not that i hate Severus! I love him! Well done! Keep writing!
Asphodel21 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
not much to say but I LOVED this one-shot...I finished it with a smile on my face :)
Angelicalynn chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
This was such a cute story. I love angsty-subby snape.
Imalena chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
thank you for this story. It was nice
Dalou28 chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Very good story ! Thank you from french fan !

Severussement vĂ´tre, Dalou28
ryuzuu chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
fiuh finally you make severus dominan...humm i dont wrong huh? well anyway i like this story but i hate when you make harry dominan huh...*pouting*

humm but yeah good story
joytiger chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
i ove it. god story :)