Reviews for Bella of Victoria
cejsmom chapter 6 . 7/13/2014
Excellent job! I was tryin to figure out what scene you were referring to when if started but as soon as she asked Alice and the girls I got excited! Perfect adaptation.
KatHat chapter 6 . 7/13/2014
I saw your tweet about a new chapter and came over to check it out! Sounds like a pretty cool updated conversion of an old favorite!

Bella seems to have found happiness and her niche in life. Irina apparently thinks she is all badass, staking her claim on Edward, but it's a hardly valid if it is not a mutual feeling! Poor Edward, trying to be nice, but what he said earlier was really rude and mean.

One quick question, when she slipped in the tree, she said "my legs up to my torso were submerged in water." If she was half-way IN the water, how did Edward get under her in the boat, she 'look down' at him and she fall ON him? ; )

Ready for the next chapter and hoping it's, you really started this in Jan. '12?
Taylor9901 chapter 6 . 7/13/2014
I am enjoying your take. I can't wait for more.
tracyluvstwilight2010 chapter 6 . 7/13/2014
Great chapter! I look forward to reading more. :)
fannygilmore chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
Our hero.
I'm thinking Bella could at least try to be friends.
fannygilmore chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
That really was a jerk move on Edward's part.
You gotta love Alice!
fannygilmore chapter 3 . 7/12/2014
Hooray. One day at a time.
fannygilmore chapter 2 . 7/12/2014
Oh how disappointing for Bella.
Hopefully, they change their minds.
fannygilmore chapter 1 . 7/12/2014
I'm thinking I love it already!
cbsparkle chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
Well done! I hope your summer improves, thanks for the terrific update :)
helenemc chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
I hope she speaks to him soon and accepts his apology. She should not let Irina's words affect her so much.
roxiegirl chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
Thanks! Loving this though I never read the story it's based on - at least that I can remember!
Cullenosopy chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
I was glad to see this in my inbox. She is almost there, although she might want to join the drama club!

Thank you! Hurry with the next chapter if you can. I hope your stress lessens.
Wheels2 chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
Maplestyle chapter 6 . 7/12/2014
My favourite part of the whole more "Ann Shirley, just what in the heck are you doing?" "Fishing for lake trout" *snorts*
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