|Reviews for The Doubtful Guest|
| Guest chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
That ending was awesome.
| ShrapnelGirl chapter 10 . 4/1/2013
This story was awesome! I really enjoyed it, especially all the political and cultural joked scattered around each chapter like sparkling jewels. Thank you for the fantastic read!
| ShrapnelGirl chapter 8 . 4/1/2013
Dear god! Russia lives in Baba Yaga's hut! You are officially awesome and though I severely enjoyed this story before, it will now receive a favorite :D.
| Fluffiet chapter 10 . 8/7/2012
YOU FINALLY FINISHED OH MY FLUFF I'M REAL HAPPY RIGHT NOW.
Then the ending was the best...XD
And Sweden would never be able to torture me with the Caramelldansen because I love that song. :3
And, I have no feedback for you really, I simply cannot think of any...Sorry. D:
| Karalora chapter 10 . 8/5/2012
It's time for...Liveblog Review Theatre!
"In the way of grandmothers, they dragged the boys into their cottage and stuffed them with all manners of lovely food explaining in broken English and Udmurt it was a 'party for everybody'."
Okay, I pretty much saw that one coming.
Sweden's ultimate weapon. Like the neutron bomb, it destroys sentient life but leaves the architecture standing.
"'Хочешь реальный мужчину? позвоните Туркмению!'"
Google Translate tells me this is funny. XD
""You use the Roman alphabet and all you do is sit around and chug alcohol.""
"Nothing but a brisk and refreshing arctic breeze."
Sweden? Your warts and long tail are showing.
"I've been in Moscow since 19:17"
Good thing that colon is there. I don't think anyone would want to be in Moscow without it.
"it's named after an herb, I think"
Right. The Cathedral Oregano.
...right? No? Am I close?
""Pffffft." America taunted. "You're going to shower us with radiation? If you do that, you'll just give us superpowers and we'll kill you faster!""
It doesn't work that way anymore, America. Nowadays the spider is genetically engineered.
| Karalora chapter 9 . 6/21/2012
This is definitely one of the better chapters as far as comedy goes. You characterized the Special Lion *perfectly*, and between its name, Tetris fanfiction, and America apparently having gone to Catholic school, I don't think I ever stopped chuckling the whole way through. It was definitely worth the wait...but I'm eager to see the finale!
| Fluffiet chapter 9 . 6/21/2012
It goes to Helsinki to lick windows?
BUT I LIKE IT. It sounds like something I would do if I was a retarded lion. (But I'm not!)
I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED. SO, SO, SO HAPPY.
Finale! S: Le-gasp this beautiful piece of literature is ending. *Sadness*
I CAN'T WAIT FOR IT THOUGH. :D
| MasterOfGrey chapter 8 . 5/28/2012
This is actually really entertaining, please do continue.
| Karalora chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
You already know my overall thoughts on this chapter, but I want to say one more thing:
I hope Finland's plan literally involves the retarded lion, and it isn't just a metaphor for hockey.
| Fluffiet chapter 8 . 4/12/2012
I know I never leave good reviews, but I always look forward to updates on this story.
And the New Jersey thing made me laugh. A lot. XD
| Karalora chapter 7 . 4/3/2012
"He mentioned the audience for a fanfic like this is tiny as is and making it a porno wouldn't win anyone over."
"You're all reading it and talking about it, but none of you ever answer my questions or comment! Do you even think about how much effort goes into this? Here I am taking my valuable time to post just so you're entertained and you guys can't find it in yourselves to say One. Single. Word."
You just love sticking it to the readers, don't you?
Thanks for (finally) posting another hilarious chapter! It's hard to put my finger on the best bit, because so many of the bits were so familiar this time around. I think I've seen that motel they're staying at...
More highlights include Iceland's objection to the nature of gorillas and Sister America's rant about stereotyping. (Nobody tell her what series she's in or her head might explode!)
| Karalora chapter 6 . 2/26/2012
At long last! It was certainly worth the wait! As always, I loved the rapid-fire humor, including little blink-and-you-miss-it gags like the reference to India. Your OCs are getting better and more amusing too, or maybe it's just that caricatures from the Americas resonate better with me. I loved the hint of Luchador!Brother Mexico we got in the first draft, and this time it's even better! As for your characterization of Costa Rica, I heard somewhere that the Costa Ricans are even more content and laid-back than the Danes...if you can imagine.
So you're tackling my town next. This should be interesting...
| Fluffiet chapter 5 . 2/9/2012
Not Texas. xD
| Karalora chapter 5 . 2/8/2012
As usual, so delightfully wacky and naughty throughout that I have a hard time identifying specific things to praise.
Although I do have to wonder why Iceland even solicits blog comments when he apparently has no intention of heeding anything contrary to his own foregone opinion.
Also, the brilliance of "Fuck the Democrats!" is that pretty much every American who's not actually a Democratic politician has been saying it. Albeit for different reasons.
Don't keep us waiting so long next time! :P
| Karalora chapter 4 . 1/22/2012
The worst thing about getting medical treatment from America is that later he presents you with the bill. *rimshot*