Reviews for Blessings in Disguise |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I just thought of something, specifically a Fanfic Idea you could try using. But for this to work, think of Genma taking his Wife's Surname instead of the usual way. Summary: When Genma Saotome believes his wife, Nodoka Saotome, accepting the Seppuku Pledge that was signed by their 2 Years Old Son, Ranma Saotome, he never expected his own Wife to Casually Follow them without him noticing, and slowly teach and train her own Son what it means to be a Saotome. With Elements of other Anime like Naruto and Dragon Ball. Specifically, Nodoka Teaches Ranma Ki Control via using the Book titled "Groundbreaking Science by Son Gohan" from the Dragon Ball Series, and Shinobi Arts with "How to be a Ninja by Namikaze Minato" from the Fanfiction titled "Common Sense" which has been in the Saotome Family. When she finds out about Genma planning to place Ranma into the Nekoken Training, she decided to use the Cloning Technique, specifically the Dividing Part of Spirit Control of Ki Control, while Nodoka teaches Ranma the right way of Nekoken, specifically a Cat Version of the Inuzuka Clan's Gijū Ninpō: Shikyaku no Jutsu aka Imitation Beast Ninja Art: Four Legs Technique with a Mix of Izuno Clan's Nekokaburi aka Cat Cloak. Also, Nodoka did thought Ranma the Saotome Kenjutsu. Throughout the Training Trip, Nodoka made a List of what her own Husband has done, and only stayed longer at Joketsuzoku the Village of Chinese Amazon since she needs to talk to them out of Involving Ranma via telling them her Plans to get rid of Genma for good, and the Amazons are willing to help, so when she went to Nerima, she went straight to the Tendō Dojo, scaring the hell out of Genma and making Ranma Happy. And when Genma and Soun Tendō tried to get Ranma to be Married to Akane Tendō, Nodoka ask if she even Sign her Approval of such Marriage, via stating that, as the head of the Saotome Family, her Signature and Stamp of Approval is required for any Documents like a Marriage Contract, and the Seppuku Pledge. Just Imagine Ranma finally revealing that he's not afraid of Cats and going Berserk is an Act, while Flying up and away from Genma's Reach to the Shock of Many, especially when Nodoka fly up as well to pull Ranma's Ear down back to the Ground. It'll be slightly different, specifically since Ranma isn't doing everything to make Akane not like him, and willingly dumping Cold Water on himself to Train Akane, as it's his Mother's Final Test of the Saotome Martial Arts aka the Ryōzanpaku Mixed Martial Arts from Ken'ichi the Mightiest Disciple, mix with Anything Goes Martial Arts. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh ranmas male form is dieing because she spends 90% of her time a female |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey im so I'm still reading ur book wanted to say if you need a proofreader let me know I have done a couple and ur stores seem interesting enough to keep me entertained while I proof read |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tbh I love the animal ear concept it's totally adorable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im NOT reading centered text. Learn to format properly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How come Koichi didn't seem to have any problem with Ranma turning into a boy in the last chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is there more? I hope so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant beleave it some how you made gennma a good character i give a clap of a hundred hands plus 4 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, not a bad story, but it lost a little of "pizzah" as it advanced. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Ryouga. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've read this up to chapter 21, I'm not quite sure why Ranma decided to challenge them in as a male? I can't really think of any reason she couldn't challenge them as a female. Of course the whole situation is a little absurd, considering even if she did loose they still had no rights to Natsuki, and challenging them in such a manner was dishonorable on sooo many levels. It would have been better if she just knocked them both out and got Natsuki back as a human. Heh, could you imagine if they lost the contest, I'm sorry Natsuki ... we thought we could win but we didn't so now the crazies own you... take care and good luck. |
![]() ![]() When P. H. Wise says your story is bad and or f-ed up, you need a rewrite. P. H. Wise convinced me that not all fukufics are terrible, (and I HATED fukufic stuff!) but he didn't pull crap out of left field like: "I suddenly agree be a magical girl with no motivation for me deciding to do so!" or such. He explained any OOC and didn't heterofy every relationship! (some people don't care if a character is gay or lesbian!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...so much potential ruined for me by turning this into a chick ranma... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tien has a third eye, Krillin has no nose, they are both fully human; and this story completely derailed... demon... fighting instantly with SSJ2 Vegeta? Seriously? The king of all demons, the most powerful of all demons, is a chump compared to a SSJ2, let alone a SSJ2 Vegeta. |