Reviews for What Happened Next
sumthin.clever.5 chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
I like it. Fairly enjoyable. I seem to have a thing for Confused Sherlock. Despite what he thinks, it's nice to see him being human.
Zacha chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Thanks for writting.
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
Liked Sherlock's POV, very well written, nice one!

:D
Jenn chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
Nice. A bit unexpected here and there, but altogether really enjoyable. You got the pacing of the plot very good. It's neither too fast, nor dragging, and creates a great atmosphere.
theDubliner chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
I like this! I really like your style. You seem to move very comfortably between Sherlock's thoughts and the action of the story. It's very rare to see someone who can manipulate those two planes as flawlessly as you've done. I also like how Sherlock's feelings are actually expressed in his thoughts (irritating) or (interesting) rather than telling us that Sherlock is actually irritated or interested - because I'm certain that mentally is the only way Sherlock really feels anything. I also loved the reference to "Not good?", very cute. Perhaps my favorite "first kiss" scene between our boys. Thank you!
MarshmallowLove chapter 1 . 1/22/2012
Omg! Love it!

It was so cute, the way Sherlock was confused and everything.

Amazing!