|Reviews for pour salt into the open wound|
| DarkMousyRulezAll chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
One thing I really loved ((and as such made me scream very loudly throughout the later parts)) was the relationship between Jimmy and Peter.
You summed up very eloquently the tumultuous feelings they both displayed and I loved the parallel structure you used!
Loved it! Great writing!
| Daziy is SoniQ chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Great story. Love it.
| Inconstant Logic chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
This. Was. Fantastic!
It was great, the sections where they both agonize over how the other has betrayed them, and how they slowly become so desperate to forget those painful memories that they convince themselves that they've always been enemies, and never more to each other.
It was written beautifully, and the way of alternating perspectives between paragraphs is one that I didn't really enjoy at the beginning (it was just difficult to keep track of who was thinking what), but it became more enjoyable towards the end. Really well done.
| Daughter of Klaus chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
I love it. Absolutely love it.
| Murphy AT chapter 1 . 9/12/2012
VERY well done progression.
| Mord-Sith Rahl chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
I love it. I hope you continue to write more in this fandom.