|Reviews for At Last|
| stephanolikesthings chapter 8 . 6/1/2012
This is really good! The Graduation Song is by Vitamin C, and I really hope you continue it!
| tortorm chapter 7 . 4/19/2012
! YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW! I WAS SMILING THE WHOLE TIME TOO! for some reason i didn't get the alert for the last chapter :(((((( but i got this one so its okay! this was amazing, i absolutely loved it and Tori was amazing :D BLAINE ! YAY! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
| captain-ally chapter 5 . 2/26/2012
This is awesome! I love it! Please update soon :)
| Averypottergleelover chapter 5 . 2/22/2012
I'm SO sorry-I can't even tell you how awful I feel for waiting this long to review!
Starting from the very beginning-of course I don't mind being in the reception instead of the wedding! I'm honored that I even get a shout-out in this story-I may have flailed a bit when I found out. I've never been in a story before, and (as you know) I love this one, so I couldn't be more excited!
Moving on the actual story (hehe). Santana's "Jewish Hobbit" comment-love it.:) I would love to see Brittany stalling the officiator! ("so, like, do you have, like, 50 wives, if you do all these weddings...? Aren't you married every time? Like, you say all the 'to have and to hold' stuff too...") That'd be quite a scene...
I love your Sebastian-bashing. I hate him. He could *actually* die (I pictured AVPM Hermione during the dragon scene when I wrote that...I may have a bit of an addiction to AVPM...) and I wouldn't care. Gahh...
Aww scared!Finn is actually adorable-is it weird that I think that? I love how relaxed Kurt actually is, and how you managed so well to balance the humor and the tension. Smart!Puck was great too, particularly:
"'What? I can know words like scintillating.' He looked between the dumbstruck faces of his friends and sulked. 'I can.'
Artie was the first to reemerge from his shock. 'Where did you even hear that word?'
'Please don't say on some porno,' Kurt interjected with a shudder.""
I died...that scene was hilarious. Plus I loved the mini Niff shout-out:)
Ahahahah Wevid...I never get sick of platonic!yet hilarious!Wevid. I also love how disorganized the guys are when the girls/Kurt are completely pulled together-it fits them perfectly.
The scene between Kurt and his dad is adorable. I completely agree that Kurt would end up surprisingly calm while marrying Blaine, as they truly are perfect for each other. I feel like the show doesn't give Burt enough love and only uses him for the tough scenes by now, so I really enjoyed how you threw that in there.
The wedding was flawless. I love Blaine and Kurt's little conversation on the alter-it's so typical them. Their vows were breathtaking. I really enjoyed reading the first couple Klaine interactions from Blaine's POV. Santana's "get some" was so perfectly placed, too. And her "Alright, enough with the face sucking. It's definitely hot and I'd be up to watch at some other point in time, but right now I want to get me some of the Hummel." And...yea, just Santana in general. She's so snarky but in such a hilarious way, and you portray that so well in your stories-I know it's probably difficult to get her personality to be conveyed well and to keep her in character, but you do it perfectly.
And I caught the "butt-trumpet" bit too and was going to have a fangirl "OMG I spotted the reference!" flail but you gave it a shout-out. It's okay, I flailed anyways:)
Well this has been the most disorganized, uninteresting review ever. I wish I could listen to the people and "use this golden opportunity to offer a well deserved praise and/or tips for improvement," but, at risk of sounding glib, I really can't find anything to (constructively) criticize! Sorry that this doesn't give you much to work with!
I will review "Marry Me" soon too, but my warm comfy bed awaits tonight. Until then...
PS-I promise I'll be better about responding to PM's now! You've been so nice about responding to reviews and I feel awful because I never respond to these responses! Now that I'm reviewing chapters as they're published though, meaning only 1 PM at a time, hopefully I can keep up and start being a better fan!
| pieface98 chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
lol, i love britney. "kurtie, wheres your dolphin?"
Ha, oh brittany.
She adds "Y or Ie" to the end of everything LOL, kurtie sanny, LOL!
| tortorm chapter 5 . 2/12/2012
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! THAT WAS THE CUTEST THING I HAVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE! :D AHHHHH! their vows were amazing :DD i can't wait for the next chapter and embarrassing stories! :P *lessthanthree*
| Flameheart2013 chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
I just found this and I think it's a really cool story. I want Kurt to kick Sebastian's butt hard! :D
And KLAINE 4EVA. This wedding's gonna b sooo cute!
| jtangel chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
Just found your story. Really am loving it so far. Would love it if Kurt would kick Sebastian.. hehe!
| tortorm chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
well hi! my names tori :D i think i'm the 9th reviewer.. :( maybe if i review twice? eh, na. :D
i didn't get time to review the last chapter before this one came out, so i'll just have to do both!
OH MY GOD THAT WAS THE MOST AMAZING PROPOSAL EVER! if someone proposes to me like that, i will literally be the happiest person alive. no joke. it was SO CUTE AND HAPPY AND FNGIEOWFBGNEFOEWF AMAZING!
i hate sebastian. thankyou for punching him in the jaw :D i love samcedes, i love the girls that are chilling, i love feisty blaine (seriously, so. hot.) and i love, well, the entire thing!
AND WAS THAT A HINT OF WEVID I SEE AT THE END! IS WES IN LOVE WITH DAVID! AHHHH! I LOVE WEVID! :D :D
anyway, amazing chapter :D *lessthanthree*
| Averypottergleelover chapter 4 . 2/5/2012
Totally something I would do if I could actually write-write the wedding scene and never get around to the wedding! ;)
Once again, I love it! Your updates never cease to impress me, clearly! I lovelovelove the Brittana. It's adorable and amazing and I love that Kurt, Quinn, Rachel, Santana (duh!), and...Lord Tubbington...all support Brittana! Too cute. I just love Brittany more than I can explain-she's like a 4-year-old. You just want to give them a bearhug for their sheer adorableness!
FINALLY! I hate, more than I can put into words, the fact that RIB seems to be trying to hold onto the possibility of a Seblaine relationship. It's just not okay with me. Maybe now that Sebastian's shown his true colors in the show Blaine will cut off communications with him? Until then, I'm perfectly happy imagining your tent scene was part of the actual show. :) But honestly, Sebastian has had it coming to him for a while now...so maybe I roote angry!Blaine on a bit, don't judge! :)
Samcedes-yay! So glad you're a fellow shipper! They're not my OTP-not by a log shot-but I absolutely support them! Especially over Shercedes/Mane/whatever that awful couple is nicknamed. He is an awful influence on her, I'm glad you have it as Samcedes instead of Mercedes/Shane.
Again, sorry for the lack of constructive criticism-I think the issue is that criticism is an essential part of constructive criticism, and I can't find a single thing that I don't like in this story! Keep up the fantastic work!
PS-I'd love to be in the wedding as Hannah, if possible. Yay! Thanks, can't wait! Also PM me if you've seen Michael? I just saw it (finally!) and would love someone to flail/rant about it with, and you seemed like a perfectly lovel person in your last PM, so, if you want someone to squee/rant about Michael with too, I'm here!
| Averypottergleelover chapter 3 . 2/5/2012
Awwww! I. Love. Insecure!Blaine. So. Very. Much.
This was stunning. Absolutely gorgeous! His proposal speech was cry-worthy, it was so sweet-it nearly gave me a cavity! But, like, in a good way...
Everything about this chapter was flawless. Well done! Blaine's speech was unbelievable-it was sweet, emotional, and so perfectly Blaine.
I also love Wes-oh Wes. He'll never learn! haha
This was exactly how I would have pictured Klaine's engagement. Screw Season 2's Blaine's "I'm not romantic!" stage. He's so utterly romantic and they're so fluffing sweet these days that I could totally picture his scene being the start of their lives together. Beautiful!
Sorry I have no helpful input, and there's not much to this review. It's just that it's flawless, and I can't find anything to suggest changing! Thank you for writing such nice, long chapter-Klaine needs a long chapter to do it justice, and do it justice you did!
To chapter 4! (yay for double updates!)
| Averypottergleelover chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
So I really want a part in that wedding so I'm going to review every chapter so far :) I've already done ch. 2, and I would have done 4 anyways, but as a bonus I'll do 1,3 and 4 instead of just 4! So here's my chapter 1 review!
I've already said it, but d'awww I love Britt! She's adorable-I just want to snatch her up and hug her! I love the Britanna in this story; your portrayal of them is absolutely lovely!
I love Kurt. Therefore, I hated what RIB put him through in Season 2 PB (pre-Blaine). Then he found Blaine, and I was happy because Kurt was happy. And even after everything RIB put them through, They ended up together. And since Klaine is absolutely my OTP, I couldn't have been happier. Therefore I wouldn't say this if I didn't mean it: I love your Klaine. They're very in-character when they should be, and even when they're purposely a bit OOC, there's always a reason and they're never OOC enough that I can't picture the story Kurt being played by Chris and the story Blaine being played by Darren. Does that make sense at all?
There was a point to that spiel, I promise! Here it is: I love how you had Kurt looking at the picture of Blaine and making reference to the fact that Blaine pulled him out of a pretty terrible place. I feel like people often try to portray that idea, but I think you've really captured it nicely here.
Finally, Blaine. Ah, nervous!Blaine. He's adorkable in every possible way. I love it. :) I love when he's freaking out that he only has 15 minutes to get to Kurt's, Wes suggests that he, oh, leaves or something then? And Blaine, in classic Blaine form, pauses, then has the "oh yea..." moment, then dashes off to his date. Oh Blainers...
On to chapter 3!
| tortorm chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
. i said i would stalk your profile and i saw this and i DIED! SO FREAKING AMAZING! I LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! :DD
| Averypottergleelover chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
YES. yesyesyes I love it! Klaine and warblers and wevid/(sadly platonic!)niff/wavel and singing...pond...gahh I love Blaine.
Yes, this is the rambling fluffy happy mush your amazing totally awesome supermegafoxyawesomehot story has reduced my mind to (that's a compliment, although I'm now realizing it doesn't sound like one. Hm...well it is! I swear!). I love it!
It's romantic and comical at the same time, a hard feat to accomplish in writing. The warblers legitimately had me laughing out loud (eliciting quite a few weird glances from my sister) and romantic!Blaine had me aww-ing along with Kurt (cue more weird sister-looks...but it was totally worth it).
I also love Brittany. I could literally picture Heather (as Britt) saying, "Where's your dolphin?" with that sweet clueless-yet-adorable way that I'm pretty sure Heather should get patented or trademarked or something. Also I love the hints of Brittana-RIB needs to get that plotline rolling already. Or (noooo!) cut it altogether. Because these 3-second-hints every episode? Not doing it for me...I need my Brittana. And my Klaine. But that's for a different rant altogether. So yea, nice dash of Brittana!
Oohhgosshh sorry for the rambling review...I find most of mine end up a bit longer and more ramble than anticipated but ah, well, such is life. Overall Ilovethisstorysofreakingmuch! Never ever ever stop writing! ...that sounded very demanding. I'll add a please. Pretty pretty please never ever ever stop writing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
Please update soon I love klaine ur a fabulous writer