Reviews for Shiver
Olmo chapter 1 . 5/4
A pity there ain't many good fics of the original Prince of Persia such as this. It would make sense for Jaffar to gloat to the Princess during the 7th level of the Prince falling down at the end of the 6th level, resulting in the Princess trying to take the matters into her own hands and sending her pet mouse to aid her beloved. If she hadn't sent her mouse, the Prince would have remained trapped in the 8th level. That small and subtle act saves both the Prince and herself, and that gives points to her characterization.
Alexxis T. Swan chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Wow I just LOVE the way you wrote her fear and acceptance. I didn't shiver but my throat did convulse in empathy. You're very good at writing princesses who are the mercy of the villain. :D
GaaraHinataWake chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
This is a great story, I wish there was more to it. I loved the descriptions, so nice job. :D