|Reviews for Control|
| Demonicmonarchghirahim chapter 1 . 6/16/2013
Haha I love this fic! Great work! It's actually because of this fic that I've accepted the head cannon that Ghirahim's got ten inches and demons can't control their magic during orgasm ;)
Keep up the awesome work!
| Namesake chapter 1 . 4/15/2013
*makes an agent to stop profusely blushing* ahem, I think this was a lovely little one-shot, and that you did well with word choice and writing. I thought that the Gira/Link relationship escalated rather quickly, but givin the nature of a oneshot I thought it was understandable, although I'm kind of curious as to Zelda's reaction and what the heck they're going to do with a forest full of daggers. :)
| dbz fangirl chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
i really like this story, but i must confess i can be squimess with some stuff and i skipped that one part. The rest was great though! ( sorry about my spelling!)
| Heather Dehmer chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay! Moooooooooorrrrreeeee!
| HollowPhoenix chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
OH MY GOD. I love you. This was...
CANNOT EVEN... 0w0
| Ghirahim2156 chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
I love, love, LOVE this story!
It's just simply FABLOUS!
And it fills my heart with RAINBOWS!...
And Link with my cum!
| CatMuto chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
I had to laugh when Ghirahim was warning Link about his... uncontrollable condition.
| Lightmare chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I like it, I really really like it! its the first realistic paring of those two.(Totally ignoring OOC'ness) _
| KayCat chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I swear, I have the most epic nosebleed over here! Awesome!
| Arukea chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
hehe love so much you did a great job .
| RAPHSIEG007 chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Totally fucking awesome!
| kitchan chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Awesome story! :D Ghirahim and Link are a cute couple. It made me happy when Link chased after Ghirahim and confessed his feelings. The fluff and sex were both awesome. ;) Nice job. Pissed off Zelda was funny too. :)
| ElinaPhantomTheSheika XD chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
is cool histori awww in secuel not god and cool store
| RusCan 4Eva chapter 1 . 5/23/2012
I know this is supposed to be a one-shot, but i really want this story to continue, i have some ideas, like Zelda finding Ghirahim and Link sprawled on a bed in afterglow! Then Groose finding out that Link is gay. Pipit's reaction to Link's decision and Skyloft in generals reaction and OF COURSE MOAR LEMONS!
| Kieran-Prince chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
It really makes no sense to me that I reviewed Change before reviewing Control, but oh well.
Lovely job with this story. Personally, Ghirahim is literally becoming my writing muse nowadays. And I just love how you characterize both Link and Ghirahim.
The only thing that kind of made me cringe was some of the dialogue when they were "doing the nasty" (so to say. I'm still trying to figure out why I cringe when I try to write the word...you know, but I can read the dirtiest stories without so much as a blush coming onto my face. Well, I'm exaggerating slightly).
When Groose comes barreling out of the sky in Skyward Sword, that nearly caused me to jump. He makes me laugh so much, although sometimes I wanna hang him by his toes.
And I agree with you wholeheartedly. 8000 words is hard, especially when you're aiming for that number.
You did such a wonderful job with this story. Good luck with your other stories :D