Reviews for Life Unexpected
sychopenguin5 chapter 11 . 2/27
I've really enjoyed this story. You've approached the mpreg thing in a way that seems realistic-in the context of Torchwood, of course-and kept our boys in character. You didn't make it overly mushy, except there at the end, which is good because those two really aren't the "romantic" type, but we did need a little bit for the happily-ever-after. They both reacted in character throughout the events, both in regards to each other and the baby and the alien threat. Even Gwen was in character, who so often gets bashed to hell in Janto stories, and I appreciate that you kept her as herself, both her good sides and her flaws. Your OCs were cool, they fit the story and the team and the context of Torchwood, no complaints there. I also am glad that you had an actual plot going besides just the pregnancy and the relationship, you had the whole mystery and then conflict with the aliens. It would have been so boring if the Yamni weren't a formidable villain. It makes me happy that Ianto and Jack both played their parts in the rescue, that Ianto wasn't a damsel-in-distress and Jack still got to have his hero moment that he loves so much.
So yeah, I liked it and good job. )
Aya2013 chapter 11 . 12/17/2013
LOVE IT! BRILLIANT WORK! THANK YOU FOR SHARING!
MyGirlCrais chapter 11 . 10/13/2013
This was really excellent. It's very difficult to write mpeg and stay wholly in character, but I really think you managed it.
Nonny chapter 11 . 8/18/2013
.BRILLIANT
ChocoBetty chapter 11 . 6/23/2013
Love how you are ending it with a joke that made me chuckle.

Seriously, I hope they just ate "Take away".

Thanks for a great story, with lots of drama, tention, a cool alien race and way to little sex for my taste! ;-)
Ianto-NotJustTheTeaBoy-Jones chapter 11 . 6/11/2013
There aren't proper words to describe how amazingly cute and adorable this was... Really... I can't, my heart has been clenching through all the reading omg... :') I've laughed, smiled and cried with this fanfic so thank you for being such a talented writer, honestly xxx
Krita chapter 11 . 5/20/2013
This was amazing! I marathoned through it, i just couldn't stop! I loved everything, especially little Jones-Harkness's name. And domestic!Jack...man, that was just too good. Great job!
nannily chapter 11 . 4/19/2013
I loved it!
illegal animagus chapter 8 . 3/2/2013
My cousin just gave birth two days ago and she named the baby maddox. Coincidence?
lesleigh chapter 11 . 1/25/2013
fab story, loved it
Super-Who-Lock-is-my-HELL chapter 11 . 12/21/2012
My god. That was brilliant!
BelladonasMom chapter 11 . 12/12/2012
I still love this story! It's the best Torchwood mpreg of all time! Please write more stories. You are so talented.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/11/2012
Ah, I just read this story again. That alone should tell you how much I like it. After all, If I didn't, why would I subject myself to it more than once?
sd4ianto chapter 11 . 11/9/2012
Thank you!
MileyHannahFan chapter 11 . 7/24/2012
Ahaha wow. Fantastic story I really really enjoyed it? Is there a sequel? ;)
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