|Reviews for Pet Trainer|
| Taiki no Hitsuzen Kage chapter 1 . 10/11
You can’t exactly spell or punctuate correctly. You forget commas or add them when they are not needed. You also need to work on spelling, you forget how to spell some Pokémons’ names, and forget how to overall spell Pokémon!
You would occasionally write sentences like these:
“What are they,” asked Naruto as he took a swig of water from canteen.
Sometimes you completely forget that if the punctuation isn’t a statement, you can put it in, or you can’t realize past, present, and the future.
| brockarot chapter 1 . 9/19
it really is sad that you probably will never update this, since it's been 5 years.
| jordanlink7856 chapter 1 . 3/29
I'd love to see a new champion with Naruto's mindset for Pokémon
| Namikaze Uzumaki Potter chapter 9 . 2/26
| Namikaze Uzumaki Potter chapter 2 . 2/26
I loved your story.
I had read it a while ago, but I wanted to give my regards.
I just hope you update soon.
| Kyuudurite chapter 9 . 2/24
If naruto had his rayquaza, and a mega stone, bam get fucked Gary
| gillafrog chapter 9 . 2/18
so cool .O.
| noirekitsune chapter 9 . 2/12
I am loving this!
And I'm kind of excited to see if kyuubi makes an appearance
| Rajdeep's chapter 5 . 1/8
This is an awesome story..
It's simply amazing..
I'd love to read more of your writings...
| Yifto chapter 9 . 12/20/2016
I like turtles
| sesshyluhvr chapter 1 . 12/18/2016
I can totally imagine this story, and see naruto being a major bamf.
| Prototype Gear chapter 9 . 10/24/2016
Damn man. You leave us hanging like that!? Divk move. Dick move.
Gonna go with my head cannon that Gary wins the fight. Because it would be the crux of all his achievements. Training up a group of normal pokemon into beasts that can go toe to toe with legendaries and beasts monsters trained, and empowered by, a living energy battery with infinite charge.
| 917brat chapter 9 . 9/21/2016
I would so love to read more of this so please keep this up.
| matian646 chapter 2 . 8/8/2016
I know how naruto feels about these battles
| jemuel23euel chapter 9 . 7/31/2016
Thank you for this story. Can't wait for more.