Reviews for Believe
lexieconextreme chapter 12 . 4/19
Write more PLEASE! I love this story so much!
Brightheart10 chapter 12 . 7/6/2015
Come back!
Dana Sto Helit chapter 12 . 10/8/2014
That was cool. Any sequel ?
Vivianne95 chapter 12 . 6/11/2014
Please Update Soon!
tangune chapter 3 . 2/14/2014
keep writing
story is good so far.
hope to see more like this
mareandfoal chapter 12 . 10/15/2013
great story, can not wait to see how it ends
Aquiescence chapter 2 . 10/13/2013
Yuu3 chapter 12 . 9/25/2013
Wonderful story. In fact, I think and I really believe that this is the vest NCIS and FMA crossover there is. It's really good. Too bad you don't seem to be continuing this, judging by the last time you updated. I was kinda hoping to see more interaction between Ed and Gibbs like in the first few chapters...
Yuu3 chapter 2 . 9/25/2013
Love it. I love this chapter.
The Band of Thieves chapter 12 . 5/19/2013
Oh my god you left it there. Why do you hate me!? Please please please please update!
wishfulliving89 chapter 12 . 2/18/2013
Why end there?! Very well written 2. So can't wait for the next chapter.
Pounce the Cat chapter 12 . 1/25/2013
Update soon?
The Almighty Werewolf chapter 12 . 1/24/2013
OMG this is WAY cool! i hope its not the end of it!
Guest chapter 12 . 11/26/2012
oh no what did al do? update soon please!
TheVirtuoso chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Hey, this is a really good first chapter. I really think that you got the characters in it just right (quite impressive really) there's just two little spelling mistakes that I found. I don't know how easy it is for someone to edit a posted chapter but I thought you might want to know anyway, just in case it is a quick fix.
The first one is here:
"there is a chance that the kid was somehow involved, so I want you-" he pointed to Magee, "to expect a phone call..."
I know you know that McGee is spelt with a 'c' because you did so for the rest of the chapter but not this time. It was your first time naming him too.
Also you said this:
"don't you dare tell anybody about this, especially Toni, got that? (you forgot the closing quotation marks here too)
at the end of the chapter and, though Tony can be spelt with an 'i' that is normally for females with the name and is not the cannon name for the character.
I really am enjoying this story and plan to read the rest of it. Please don't think of this as a flame it's only meant to be a critique.
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