|Reviews for The One that Never Was Book Two|
| dbpbatm chapter 62 . 1/10
| tnuccio chapter 36 . 9/10/2013
I'm not sure why he's not taking this opportunity to let her see things from his pov, the Edward POV story goes into much more detail about how he felt like she was the one who put the limits on and the one who thought of him as a "townie" etc. I'm going to go and have to read the other Edward POV story to see if he has a plan and that's why he's STILL not taking the time to correct her.
| tnuccio chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
It's a shame that after four years Bella hasn't gotten any clarity or grown maturity wise. I hope this changes. I'm not sure i'm liking her very much right now :)
| Nedward chapter 62 . 6/22/2013
That was cool.
| IchigoNaruto chapter 36 . 3/9/2013
Once again Bella gives in first, is there ever a time where Edward on his on volition confesses everything. I'm afraid she'll give him chance. He knew what she was feeling cos she wrote him a damn letter and he didn't think to explain himself? he knew what she thought of their hooking up in high school ('happy to be one of hook ups' or something to that effect) and you want to tell us that he didn't know how she might be feeling. If he didn't then E has got be the dumbest person. It's frustrating to read and sometimes love isn't everything.
| IchigoNaruto chapter 34 . 3/9/2013
Please tell me they don't have sex in heat of the moment thing cos that would be incredibly cliche.
| IchigoNaruto chapter 29 . 3/9/2013
Why is it that Bella is always manipulated? It's not fair to her. Of course she can't deny a dying woman and Esme knows this. Everyone wants to blame Bella for not listening and running away but no explanations are ever given to her. And I hate situations like this in fics, an ailment brings them back together. Couldn't E have for once laid it on the line and told her everything and that he wanted a serious relationship (during those two years of uni). Without the plot point of his dying mother (which makes him out to be a sad victim) couldn't he have just said sorry for lying and told her his view of things in high school, I'm sure she would have understood.
| MsLiss chapter 56 . 1/5/2013
what does it mean to say " you're worth the risk" if you dont make plans for the future. i really dont get these two
did they at least make a declaration of committment? of exclustivity?
these two are fucked up
| MsLiss chapter 44 . 1/5/2013
committment thats what you want and deservve bella dont DO IT! again i ask dont do it...you didnt listen last time (Re book1)
| MsLiss chapter 40 . 1/5/2013
omg these two frustrate me!
Why did he 'date' Jane while being with Bella
Wh wasnt he just with Bella?
Can she ask him that?
| MsLiss chapter 38 . 1/5/2013
oh thank god Bella
finally being adult and using your words
| MsLiss chapter 36 . 1/5/2013
i dont understand
| dragongirl423 chapter 62 . 12/30/2012
I have spent the whole day reading this and the first story :) and it was a day well spent! I absolutely love it! Very well written, amazing plot, and awesome characters! You're a spectacular author!
| helenemc chapter 62 . 8/15/2012
Just finished Bella's POV and wanted to thank you for such a wonderful story before I go on to EPOV. What a roller coaster ride. I loved it!
| wasnotthe1 chapter 36 . 8/10/2012
please don't let her crumble and them fall back into stupidity without working stuff out first