Wow , that was amazing. You are an amazing writer. Absolutely loved it. Thank you ️️️

This format really ... and detracts from the story.

Why did you change your writing style.?

This is a great story, the most original I have read for a long time.

Edward is a bit hypocrite, he didn’t tell Bella he was getting help but is pissed off Tanner didn’t share this info with Bella.

Expect he probably knew because of his doctor privileges and therefore couldn’t say without breaking patient confidentiality

Well written...amazing twists... loved it, thank you.

AMAZING! All of them were amazing. Every emotion imaginable. Wish there were more.

I saw it rec’d from Staceleo’s Story the Ugly Duckling Bakery chapter 8. So thankful I am getting to read this- read the other two first- loved them.

Wow!

A lot of mistakes in this chapter

What does Edward mean, the house HE pays for?

I don't get it. Edward just got back after being gone a year and in the very first conversation he has with bella he says "it always comes back to this. it will always come back to this. Me leaving" as if hes exasperated. As if they've had this conversation 100 times already. It makes him come off so fucking wrong.

She hasn't seen him in a year and she just jumps in his car...says nothing while hes driving...then when he parks at a lake she jumps out of the car and runs to the water?

Bella is a fucktard.

Rereader. I super duper liked this story the first read. And i still looove how u write. Life. Changed philosophies ei? Sorry for the harsh comment but it just doesn't make sense to me anymore. Bah. One opinion out of infinity