Reviews for What If
Monnie Mcintosh chapter 187 . 1/24
Wow , that was amazing. You are an amazing writer. Absolutely loved it. Thank you ️️️
Bevey99 chapter 141 . 1/24/2022
This format really ... and detracts from the story.
Bevey99 chapter 22 . 1/24/2022
Why did you change your writing style.?
fanfictionalcolic chapter 187 . 5/26/2021
This is a great story, the most original I have read for a long time.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 159 . 5/26/2021
Edward is a bit hypocrite, he didn’t tell Bella he was getting help but is pissed off Tanner didn’t share this info with Bella.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 155 . 5/26/2021
Expect he probably knew because of his doctor privileges and therefore couldn’t say without breaking patient confidentiality
moonwinks chapter 187 . 1/24/2020
Well written...amazing twists... loved it, thank you.
JD Thorn chapter 187 . 12/28/2019
AMAZING! All of them were amazing. Every emotion imaginable. Wish there were more.
JD Thorn chapter 135 . 12/28/2019
I saw it rec’d from Staceleo’s Story the Ugly Duckling Bakery chapter 8. So thankful I am getting to read this- read the other two first- loved them.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 1 . 1/24/2019
Guest chapter 59 . 1/4/2019
A lot of mistakes in this chapter
Guest chapter 52 . 1/4/2019
What does Edward mean, the house HE pays for?
Guest chapter 16 . 1/3/2019
I don't get it. Edward just got back after being gone a year and in the very first conversation he has with bella he says "it always comes back to this. it will always come back to this. Me leaving" as if hes exasperated. As if they've had this conversation 100 times already. It makes him come off so fucking wrong.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/3/2019
She hasn't seen him in a year and she just jumps in his car...says nothing while hes driving...then when he parks at a lake she jumps out of the car and runs to the water?

Bella is a fucktard.
agoogoo chapter 184 . 11/14/2017
Rereader. I super duper liked this story the first read. And i still looove how u write. Life. Changed philosophies ei? Sorry for the harsh comment but it just doesn't make sense to me anymore. Bah. One opinion out of infinity
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