Reviews for What If
Bevey99 chapter 141 . 1/24
This format really ... and detracts from the story.
Bevey99 chapter 22 . 1/24
Why did you change your writing style.?
fanfictionalcolic chapter 187 . 5/26/2021
This is a great story, the most original I have read for a long time.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 159 . 5/26/2021
Edward is a bit hypocrite, he didn’t tell Bella he was getting help but is pissed off Tanner didn’t share this info with Bella.
fanfictionalcolic chapter 155 . 5/26/2021
Expect he probably knew because of his doctor privileges and therefore couldn’t say without breaking patient confidentiality
moonwinks chapter 187 . 1/24/2020
Well written...amazing twists... loved it, thank you.
JD Thorn chapter 187 . 12/28/2019
AMAZING! All of them were amazing. Every emotion imaginable. Wish there were more.
JD Thorn chapter 135 . 12/28/2019
I saw it rec’d from Staceleo’s Story the Ugly Duckling Bakery chapter 8. So thankful I am getting to read this- read the other two first- loved them.
TwiTwiAgain chapter 1 . 1/24/2019
Guest chapter 59 . 1/4/2019
A lot of mistakes in this chapter
Guest chapter 52 . 1/4/2019
What does Edward mean, the house HE pays for?
Guest chapter 16 . 1/3/2019
I don't get it. Edward just got back after being gone a year and in the very first conversation he has with bella he says "it always comes back to this. it will always come back to this. Me leaving" as if hes exasperated. As if they've had this conversation 100 times already. It makes him come off so fucking wrong.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/3/2019
She hasn't seen him in a year and she just jumps in his car...says nothing while hes driving...then when he parks at a lake she jumps out of the car and runs to the water?

Bella is a fucktard.
agoogoo chapter 184 . 11/14/2017
Rereader. I super duper liked this story the first read. And i still looove how u write. Life. Changed philosophies ei? Sorry for the harsh comment but it just doesn't make sense to me anymore. Bah. One opinion out of infinity
agoogoo chapter 185 . 11/14/2017
"I tried to ruin your life". Actually, an ignorant man in that position woulda had the same effect on Bella and Masen.. Except he wouldn't be labeled an asshole bastard when Bella chose Edward. He'd just be the innocent loser among the 3. Coz u know, really, Edward HIMSELF shoulda told Bella he was going away for help. Versus being all mysterious and going byebye without reason and... dunno... expecting no one to make moves on Bella after he apparently abandoned them. Does he see Bella as that undesirable? He was stupid. They're just lucky that Tanner and Beth turned out to be weirdo creepy stalker types
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