Reviews for The Mercenary
Vi-Violence chapter 3 . 8/26/2018
Any chance of more?
littleweb chapter 3 . 6/17/2013
more please
The Other Dixon chapter 3 . 9/10/2012
Can't wait until you update again 8)
Samantha Michaelis chapter 3 . 8/15/2012
It looks cool! Continue
RDA spy chapter 3 . 3/24/2012
I love your writting style, it seems professional and so I am able to feel the character's emotions and the atmosphere in my imagination thanks to your detailed descriptions.

You have got me hooked again, hope you update soon :)
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 3 . 3/22/2012
i loved it! can't wait for more!
compa16 chapter 2 . 2/19/2012
Very intersting
chawk1993 chapter 2 . 2/8/2012
Poor Ella. More!
chawk1993 chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
I'd miss my family too if I had to be shipped off to some distant planet. Be sure when you get the other chapters up that you delete the original story. Can't wait to read more.
LordofVoid chapter 2 . 1/25/2012
This story is awesome! I always love stories where Jake has another sibling to come see him.

By the way, where did you get the name Tal'Na in the last story?