Reviews for Muddy Wings
Guest chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
good story cant wait to see more
AppleDash Fan97 chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
This is great TwiDash and I can't wait for future updates.
SonicMX chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
Amazing. Please post the next chapter.
SonicMX chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
I really like this. A top of the class story. And it's st
mlpfan chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
well this is certainly a surprise. i just wish that i had found it sooner. good job. hope that you have more planned.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/8/2013
Other people may not react well to this story, but I have a lot of gay in my family and I'm glad social media (that's not the right word :P) has identified with it. I say to the people that come here for a good story, you have come to the right place. (If you're into this kinda stuff)

Cute story!
One suggestion though... If you could make the chapters a bit shorter, we could get regular updates. But otherwise great.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
dagnytheartist chapter 2 . 4/24/2013
I like the different perspectives throughout the chapter. Owlicious kind of freaked me out though.
Rarity was pissing me off, though, telling Twilight "the proper way" to go on a date! It's TwiDash, so their relationship is unique and doesn't need to be normal! But that's Rarity for you...
By the way, I like the South Park reference "you better bring a lot of money, or Y'all will have a bad time." I can't tell if you did that on purpose or if it's just a coiincidence, but either way you made me laugh.
I also like the slight Rarijack shipping.
xxxRed Ravenxxx chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
YAY new chapter and this one freaking HILARIOUS only part I disliked was Rarity telling Twilight how to do a date liked Twis ideas better but other then that I absolutely loved it!
xxxRed Ravenxxx chapter 1 . 4/18/2013
Really enjoyed reading this(a rare thing for fics on here)was very cute and made me LOL hard thank you for posting this great oneshot just wished it was more to it
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2013
continue that story please its good but you should continue.
The 5th Dragon Guardian chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
Hiruko the Baku chapter 1 . 4/20/2012
I literaly felt like a pile of goo at The end x3 so cute!
PinkAndDeadly chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Nice TwiDash story.

Funny thing, pegasi wings being an erogenous spot, hehe...
AngryFan chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Why haven't you continued this?
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