Reviews for Weak Spot
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
I loved the ending thought it was really cute
GimmickGirl chapter 1 . 1/9
the ending was funny and cute! good job!
Setia Prenn chapter 1 . 7/14/2015
well i liked your ending! its alright, really. the rest of the story was good, like ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
Ominous Rain chapter 1 . 6/15/2014
Very good smut I must say :) One of the best neko fics with these two out there!
MisakiXRevive chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
The layout was kinda weird, there should have been more experimenting with their feelings but it wasn't bad. I'm looking forward to your next stories.
Ice Dragon of the West chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
i love it :D
valgal121 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
awww you should write another one
Lightmare chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
A happy lunatic indeed _ when I saw your summary I actually started cackleing evily. I just knew It would be a good one! keep it up and have fun! hope to see more
Mh chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
This os probably the best hybrid/neko story I've ever read! Keep up with the good work!
BlueDragon chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Your sexy... And YOU KNOW IT! :D
Tenshi no Yami chapter 1 . 4/29/2012

That was awesome!

Grimm got his claim after all so all you suitors back the hell off!

Liked this story and this is your first? Nice *thumbs up*

Write more, 'kay?
Paradox 2.0 chapter 1 . 4/8/2012
*happy sigh* I do LOVE a good hybrid story between our two favorite boys~

Excellent work! I haven't seen a hybrid story of this calibre in a while, so it was very refreshing to read this. Just a few grammar mistakes, an easy fix, but other than that, the plot ((what little plot there is XD no complaints here~)) and spelling are excellent.

You have some serious talent, and with a bit of time, you could easily become one of the most loved authors on here. I eagerly look forward to more from you.

Ja ne~
yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 1 . 4/6/2012
I love this it's so adorable and hot at the same time please do a sequel.
jakondas chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
Did I get that right, are you really 15? If so... I'm a little disturbed by how good this turned out. I was writing the het version (original stuff only) at your age, and I can honestly say it was never this good! _ Therefor the only thing I have to say to you is; it is a terrible waste to ignore such potential. Please continue writing, don't let things like embarrassment, timidity, or the struggle to get what you envision onto the page stop you.
Recklessly Impulsive chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
*wags finger*





Oh why?...

DID YOU NOT TELL ME YOU HAD FINALLY WRITTEN SOMETHING? This came out a month ago, young lady, and I didn't find out until today _

Anyway, now that I'm done being mad with you for not telling me, I'll move on to reviewing!

The theme was very nice! It's been used before by countless people, but it's always awesome when interpreted in different ways, and yours was similar to one I have read before, but the concept was different. As in, Grimmjow didn't want Ichigo as a mate. He just wanted a nice, hard shag, and Ichigo was a challenge, so fucking Ichigo was the thrill of the chase. Of course, later, they got together.

But YOURS, on the other hand, appears very much the same with the way Grimmjow acts around Ichigo. But, I can see the background history within the text where Grimmjow has tried on countless occasions to get with Ichigo, but was turned down. And smugness was his scapegoat from humiliation if ever turned down.

It flowed well and was a easy read~ As in, I didn't have to go back and read the line again to understand it, so good job! I could SENSE your hesitance o_O

It's odd. I could, like, see where you hesitated and how much you planned each section. That's not a bad thing. I'm glad you tried really hard. And you did well! :D

Detail was nice :o And the kissing was rather sweet~ And adorkable because Ichigo was like "I don't want to kiss you DX!" (in his head) and Grimmjow was like "You're trapped now, my little pretty :3!" Which, in all honesty, I think he would say that. xD

Now then! The thing you probably are dying to hear about - THE SMUT! Okay...

Lemme think, quick...

The build up was steamy and had a nice feel to it. I could sense the lust growing as Grimmjow administered his devious ministrations.

And I liked the sex...maybe could have added a little more juiciness! Like rimming, or you could of had Grimmjow pull out and come on Ichigo's face. Or a switch in position, so Ichigo rides Grimmjow, or he gets on his hands and knees and lets Grimmjow fuck him doggy style~~!

I'll stop before I get carried away. XDDD

Loved it, overall!

Great job, honey! 3


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