Reviews for Ashikabi No Shinobi
akisandy8989 chapter 9 . 6/5
up until now you have only been writing the same thing again and again and again just with different words... yes its a problem for naruto to get accustomed to the emotions he had buried i understand that but you don't have to mention the same thing in every chapter half the time ... you should do more like his training to get back in shape ... him trying to get more info on sekirei plan ... trying to calm his emotions down and much more but no ... all naruto is doing is thinking about his emotional unstability
kageknuser2710 chapter 43 . 1/16
Loved the ending. Thank you, for the story!
Dasgun chapter 1 . 11/23/2022
randomguy9005 chapter 20 . 11/20/2022
whatever can go wrong, will go wrong.

nighttuner15 chapter 6 . 11/9/2022
super nerfed naruto then. kappa
nighttuner15 chapter 5 . 11/9/2022
why do people use naruto for their fanfics if its just to nerf him? At most sekirei are at low-jonin level.
magic ninja vs slightly superhuman with 1 abilitie.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 23 . 10/26/2022
this broke boy with sound sekirei spent all their MBI credit card money?
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 21 . 10/24/2022
for people all surviving a death game together, there are too many intentional abrasive behaviors.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 21 . 10/24/2022
so much dumb
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 20 . 10/24/2022
dumb with no boundaries
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 20 . 10/24/2022
what idiot goes directly from sewers into someone's home?
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 19 . 10/24/2022
One of the worst chapters ever. it's less to do with the idiot girl character and more to do with the slow inept idiot boy character.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 19 . 10/24/2022
dumb MC is so irritating and making all the world stupid
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 17 . 10/23/2022
there should have been an opening story arc of alternate universe Naruto through the millennia devolving during the major life failures. at least somewhat hit events which made the MC a lonely long suffering loser. the short thoughts or nightmares alluding to huge differences from canon Naruto were too late once they finally arrived.
Naruto can have all capable beauties, but Hinata is only for Naruto.
DainBramagedMoFo chapter 17 . 10/23/2022
I don't understand why Naruto's chakra tears apart his muscles
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