up until now you have only been writing the same thing again and again and again just with different words... yes its a problem for naruto to get accustomed to the emotions he had buried i understand that but you don't have to mention the same thing in every chapter half the time ... you should do more like his training to get back in shape ... him trying to get more info on sekirei plan ... trying to calm his emotions down and much more but no ... all naruto is doing is thinking about his emotional unstability

Loved the ending. Thank you, for the story!

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whatever can go wrong, will go wrong.

hilarious

super nerfed naruto then. kappa

why do people use naruto for their fanfics if its just to nerf him? At most sekirei are at low-jonin level.
magic ninja vs slightly superhuman with 1 abilitie.

this broke boy with sound sekirei spent all their MBI credit card money?

for people all surviving a death game together, there are too many intentional abrasive behaviors.

so much dumb

dumb with no boundaries

what idiot goes directly from sewers into someone's home?

One of the worst chapters ever. it's less to do with the idiot girl character and more to do with the slow inept idiot boy character.

dumb MC is so irritating and making all the world stupid

there should have been an opening story arc of alternate universe Naruto through the millennia devolving during the major life failures. at least somewhat hit events which made the MC a lonely long suffering loser. the short thoughts or nightmares alluding to huge differences from canon Naruto were too late once they finally arrived.
Naruto can have all capable beauties, but Hinata is only for Naruto.

I don't understand why Naruto's chakra tears apart his muscles