|Reviews for Genesis|
| DetectiveLion chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
I really had never thought of John's biting the apple that way. I don't know if it's a common theory of if it's something you thought of yourself, but it's a clever idea either way. The imagery in this was wonderful, everything flowed nicely and there wasn't a single moment when I wasn't utterly engrossed in the story. Thank you for writing this. :)
| Karoimirth chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
This fic is amazing! I can't belive no one has reviewed. So even though I suck at this thing, I'll try xD.
How you mixed the prompt with HS is lovely. How the taste and feeling of the apple in his mouth changes.
"New beginnings," she says.
And the end is just adorable~
Oh. Oh. Shit. "Karkat, I still want to be friends with you!"