Reviews for Chink in the Armor
Guest chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Do you plan on continuing this story? Its great, and I'd love to see what happens in later episodes.
bloomyj chapter 9 . 11/17/2014
I know it's been a while, but I would love to see more.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Aimee B chapter 10 . 3/30/2014
Please, continuos i like so much this story!
Guest chapter 10 . 3/8/2014
so happy to see you continuing this story, cant wait for the upcoming chapters!
JustBFree5 chapter 10 . 2/8/2014
So glad that you didn't abandon this story! I love how Nolan has come to accept Tony but it's very sad that she still feels the need to hold back on telling him of her past but it's understandable - given what she's been through and the lies her mother told her as she grew up, of course Tony will be playing things close to the chest rather than being an immediate open book.

Please don't give up on this story, it's unique and showcases Nolan in a stand-alone role rather than just as Emily's sidekick. Please update soon!
DDLJ chapter 10 . 2/7/2014
Oh wow, now I'm super excited! You've really improved in how you delivery the lines and set the pacing for each scene. Thank you for clearing that up, sometimes we as readers have to remember that third person POV is like first person POV in regards to the characters feelings and emotions. Someone kick Tyler in the throat please... ugh - thought I really enjoyed when he said ' Nolan isn't very bright with things with beating hearts and not a hardrive.' WIN, and now I'm super interested in Tony's history and her lollipop addiction!
DDLJ chapter 3 . 2/4/2014
Wait, I noticed that Tony likes lollipops/suckers when she's nervous/angry/looking for a distraction and she likes them a lot. Is she a smoker? I mean the way she goes with those things would suggest a smoker's tendency. If that's the case your a genius and I look forward to how this'll all play out. Oh please update soon you're story was the first OC fic I read and was centered around our favorite blonde billionaire!
Samantha chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
I really like the story it's a great premise, Tony seems like a really great character. I think that the constant clothing descriptions sorta drag the story a bit, they don't seem really necessary to know what brand she's wearing. and why is she always referred to as a bastard? :(
happypanda19 chapter 9 . 3/10/2013
Poor Tony, I hope she opens up to Nolan soon

cant wait for an update! :3
EviexXx8 chapter 9 . 1/21/2013
omg, i loved that story. Well doone. it was so well written! You really got your chararcters on par. I enjoyed every second of that. :)
LittleRed22 chapter 9 . 1/5/2013
great story, an interesting take on the story. please update soon
Guest chapter 9 . 12/10/2012
Love how unique this ff is!
Cant wait for an update...thank you writer for bringing this story its wonderful hope to see development between Toni and Emily, i especially love the parallels that Emily draws between her and Toni :)
jesuisunfantome chapter 9 . 12/8/2012
OMG! I spent the last three hours reading story!
I LOVE IT! Please update SOON! I can't wait.
It's just SO good :)
Guest chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
I LOVE your story. Can't wait for more!
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