Reviews for Pervade
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
it's good, but remember Americans don't say peaky (or generally even know what if means, lol). :)
HCookie chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
You could make this into a multi-chap fic, that's how good this is:)
MaxRide05 chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
I wish this was longer.
hazelheart93 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
how about a second chapter?
JaneA0202 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
good, nice..but I wish it was longer with some smut :D there was a good oportunity for kissing...
deerane chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Very nice, I really enjoy your writing.
Toriblue chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Now *this* is good erotica. You turned a relatively simple scene into a smokin' hot moment. I also liked that Elena is older ...it gives you the freedom to completely disregard the whole threesome mess. I don't know if you ever plan on writing a sequel ...but...for the record - I'd be on that like white on rice!
GoSpikey chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
Heh.

Lol, that's about the only reaction I have after reading this. Stuff like this would fit nicely in the next TVD one, the time travel one, but perhaps then not with vamping out but in other situations? And then a different rating, but sensual? Heh. Lol.

There's another story there, I think. See you there.

Spikey
JerSeaGal chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
Loved it! Hope this happens on the show!
buffyfan9 chapter 1 . 3/6/2012
ilovedit
Kay chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Oh so delicious! This was amazing!

"Breathlessly he watches as a trickle of blood makes its way slowly down her neck to stop above the swell of her breasts. Instinctively he arches her back again, one hand fisting her hair and bends down to lick the trail of blood slowly off her skin."

- This was gorgeous perfection3 So hot.
FlyingPigMonkey chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
love it!
Wolflover235 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Nice! When I saw TVD show. And the part where Elijah came. I was sensing a 'relationship' between them but they never showed it. Loved it. Maybe make more?
jaufanfic chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
Ypu can't end it there! The story says complete but there is still so much more you can do qith this story! write more please!
Betty chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
I feel the need to thank you for writing this, lol. It's sexy but also really lovely, especially the last paragraph. You managed to create a beautiful snapshot of their relationship *and* you got Elena to straddle Elijah. Huzzah!
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