Like she chasing someone she kissed 3 times, she didnt even get to know him at all, only that hes linda sad and drinks a lot

I swear almost every story I read Bella only standa up for herself after she lets people walk all over her and treat her like a pawn. Confidence isnt a sin omg

That is an amazing story! I couldn’t put it down. Thank you so much for sharing.

This story is so amazing so far!

How have I never read this story before? It’s absolutely brilliant! I have laughed and cried. Thank you for such a beautiful story. It is definitely a story that I will reread.

Estaba leyendo y escribes muy bien pero sinceramente dejo de leer porque es aburrido ver a una Bella degradarse así detrás de un puto estúpido, tenga problemas con su pasado o no,el la usa y le dice que no quiere verla y ella decide no verlo más por su salud mental y luego va corriendo como un perrito desesperado y el vuelve a tan humillante y degradante ser así...dejo de leer.
Un saludo.

Though i dont get the returned tormented soldier kind of stories, your writing is like a flow of a river, it bends and changes direction but its so organic. Felt like reading elif shafak or coelho even. A very modern poetic approach. I hope you keep writing.

I have read so many fanfics! Not being a American i dont understand what your fascination with 'served in war - poor soul with PTSD'. Personally it destroys the appeal of the story as a it shows a very linear almost tunnel view.

How do you reconcile being drawn to such an asshole.
The things he said and assumed.
Yikes

I honestly don't know what to say! WTF just happened? He is one sick man...I hope Bella doesn't let him back in her life!

I'm so anxious to see how you have Edward react to her confession! I just can't figure out how he will, especially if Bella keeps chickening out! Please have this happen soon... dying here!

This is a very intriguing story to me. I don't remember reading a story where Bella had such a physical impediment! Breast cancer sucks! Love her tats...wonder if Edward will? For all of her strength, she seems somewhat fragile. I like her!

Today I found out that “oozing that sugary pussy all over me” set me ablaze. Damn good wordplay

I truly hope for some kind of epilogue or something. I'll be waiting for more!

OH. MY. GOODNESS. I cannot BELIEVE this is the first time I read this, and what a treasure it has been! I’m CONSTANTLY searching for this story on fanfiction, but have never been able to find one that satisfied that craving for rollercoaster emotions, drama, and the best kind of love! I am SO HAPPY to have found this gem and add it to my favorites to read again and again when I need this fix! This is so beautiful, and it had me ugly crying most of the time. Thank you for putting the time and effort into the words for two characters that so many people can relate to and showing the complexity of these situations because it’s never a single attitude or thought process—it is always wishy-washy. I could honestly spend hours adding commentary here for this story, and maybe in the future I’ll review an individual chapter or two that bring me the greatest bursts of emotion. For now, I look forward to reading this again and more of your work! Always, happy writing!:)