Reviews for someone to save me! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awww! Its so cute!(When Bella imprinted on Paul!) Doucheward deserved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow that about a lot surprises I am glad Bella did not marry Edward. ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was amazing. I would have even liked to seen it as a chapter story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a good on shot story I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing with us. Glad that the pack saved Bella. |
![]() ![]() I liked it and would love to read more one day |
![]() ![]() ![]() BRILLIANT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it |
![]() ![]() short but good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't wait for the next update |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful o/s. thank you |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it alot alot alot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was good i liked it :):):D:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay well a few things need explaining such as how Bella found out they were cheating but yet none of the cullens knew including Jasper who can feel their emotions, how Alice doesn't know she knows since surely she would have seen how Bella found out, how the Cullens or even Charlie didn't know that Edward was hitting Bella and how Charlie phased and Bella suddenly phased since surely it would have been triggered when they met. Other then that it was alright. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ummm yeah ok. Interesting, but you should probably look into a beta reader, lots of mistakes. |