Reviews for Memory Pending |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking hell, holy shit, jesus fucking- Just wow. All the wow! I won't lie, I cried so freaking much last chapter, and shed a few more happier ones this chapter. This fic was amazing though! I'm so glad I started looking at completed fics backwards through the search pages. Amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful... I have never sobbed for an ending of a book before. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was a nice story. I took a break after my last review but I still stand by it. tragedies do tend to have constant negatives just usually not so utterly blatant. Thanks for posting it anyway. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't really care how old this story is, your obsession with harming your character via Dash is getting really old really fast. At the very least the rest is enjoyable but this is becoming unbearable. |
![]() ![]() I don't really like the Rainbow x AJ ship, but otherwise this is a really good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy crap so much detail! I could never write something like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd work on not describing every little thing and kind of moving things forward faster. Seems alright though other than that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() And so ends the tale of our great hero... When Equestria was in trouble, he answered the call for help... A great man, or stallion in this case, he was helping those in need... (Trying to pull a Fallout NV ending speech) |
![]() ![]() ![]() What the... Who the... This. Is... Right now, I'm contemplating whether to bash my head on a concrete wall multiple times for saying this fic sucked the first three ,or four, chapters I've read. I'm actually GLAD to have read through despite my earlier distaste. Looks like I've learned a bit about first impressions myself, and implementing the lesson to the reader just added the general awesomeness the way to let the fic flow. And the fact that this fic isn't for the enjoyment full-blown bronys, or MLP fans alone. I only watched the first episode of MLP, and wow...just wow... You. Are. Awesome. No seriously, your just THAT fricking awesome! |
![]() ![]() That was amazing. Its 2:37am and im on the verge of crying. I didn't expect this. Thank you. -silence- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dude I'm not ashamed to say I cried at the end first during the skewing and the out of joy for the begging keep up please you did a great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story from the beginning and am waiting (hoping for it to continue) for more love way you plotted your theories. Hope for more :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jobs a good one! |
![]() ![]() Im eagerly waiting for an equally awesome sequel |
![]() ![]() This story was an absolute pleasure to read. The only problem was me staying up to 3am to finish it! I was hooked, badly. I also thought both epilogues were a suitable end to Mender's tale, but I'm a sucker for #2 :p Waiting with bated breath for your sequel. Huzzah, the fun has been doubled! |