FINALLY you update on FF. I was wondering what was going on. Guys, don't worry, sequel is on the way.

the ending it put me to tears it was so touching i truly loved it

I must say that this story so far has Surpassed all other fan fictions and even Most books I've ever read. It was quite refreshing to have a my little pony story that isn't of a modern day brony automatically adjusting to life in Equestria like most of these stories are and it is one of those stories I cannot put down (literally, I can't literally put down my computer) I'd suggest this to anyone and look forward to the next chapter

Holy crap, this is starting to make sense now, the whole dimension travel thing(which you did a good job of explaning) and story as a whole seems to be coming together. At least for this part, hope it turns out well for mender and of course your humor is great, waiting anxiously for the next part.

I look forward to reading what happens next in your story

i have to say this is my favorite story out there. please keep up the great work.

i really enjoy this story, it would be a shame if it didnt continue.

I had to take SEVERAL breaks during this chapter. At one point I almost passed out. No story, not even Cupcakes has ever done that to me. It was very strange, amazing, and disturbing at the same time. I can't really explain it, but I have this feeling in my heart like, "WHOAH!"

"always bring a towel" Hitchikers guide to the galaxy reference? :D

great

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This story just keeps me on the edge of my seat, the mystery of who he is, the rock things, and plus its really funny, eager to hear more.

I like this as much as the next guy, BUT WHATS WITH ALL OF THE HEAD BASHING! I mean, 1st into a crater, 2nd by a falling bag with an apple core in it, and now a rock?

Wow... That's the first word to say at least.

Immensely immersive chapters, an edge of the seat writing style. I'm happy to say that I read these first nine chapters in one sitting and am eagerly waiting to read more!

~Nev

Moon mender is a pretty good name, murphy didnt sound like a good pony name dit it,but yeah good chapter. Way to keep the mystery going

woah, at the end was that a hallucination or a memory, this is getting interesting. Is murphy his name now then, it fits with the whole always hurt thing, really you love to torture this guy with head injuries. lol, looking forward to more