Reviews for When a Lover Dies
EraEon chapter 9 . 3/6/2015
I know it's been awhile since you've updated but will you continue this story?! I need to know what will happen to Astley. This story is soooo amazing!
MnMsRoK chapter 9 . 1/6/2015
Bruh. BRUH. What is this giant ass cliff hanger for this AMAZING story doing here?! I LOVE it! I would love to hear what happens!
pinky317 chapter 9 . 8/12/2014
Why has this not been updated for 2 years? I just finished reading Endure after pulling an all nighter yesterday because, as I'm sure you already know, the Need series is freaking addictive. And while I am totally satisfied with how it ended, I still wanted more Zara/Astley action so I turned to fanfiction lol. Your story is sooooo amazing and I wanna know what happens next so you should seriously update even though it's been, like, two years. Hopefully you read this and become inspired again to write! Keep up the awesome writing! :D
youthfuldreamer chapter 9 . 7/16/2013
Update soon :)
An adoring Fan chapter 7 . 9/7/2012
Hey um the two chapters you just uploaded didn't work and not loading up i can only get to this one would you be able to re upload them?
teamastley101 chapter 9 . 9/9/2012
This is incredible :)
youthfuldreamer chapter 7 . 5/15/2012
I loved this chapter and thanks for bringing astley in it! Lol plus I loved how explained the power of a pixie kiss :) I still enjoy reading your take on endure even after reading the real book twice it's the best one! :D keep Writeing!
Musia888 chapter 6 . 4/3/2012
It's okay that this chapter wasn't that long.

I liked it anyways )

I really like how you're elaborating

on a minor character from the series.

Keep typing, and I'll keep reading.
teamastley101 chapter 6 . 3/31/2012
this is really good :) please continue and update soon :)
youthfuldreamer chapter 3 . 3/27/2012
I normally wouldn't do this but I would love to see what another need fans think. And since I love your chapters the best I'd figure I'd post it here maybe get your view on it?. It's my dream cast on the need series. I'm not doing this for viewers I'm use to not havering to many lol. I just want to know what fans think because I would like to see if I got them as good as I think. So heres the link - #/profile?desktop_uri%2Fuser%2Feliahisepic%2Fvideos&usereliahisepic&tabvideos&glUS
youthfuldreamer chapter 5 . 3/26/2012
The story was great and I think you've done a good job with nick so far. I love the group of plotting and the idea so far. I'd like to see more astley though of course. By the way the new pixie great addition :) hope this isn't to late of a review :( lol
Musia888 chapter 5 . 3/24/2012
I know it is kind of late to first review your story,

but I just started reading it and I can't stop.

Your writing quality is really very good.

I feel kind of like I'm really reading Endure.

(Shh... don't tell anyone, but I think

you have the best Need fanfic out right now)

Please keep on writing )
teamastley101 chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
OH i forgot to mention can you please please please please PLEASE let astley and zara fall for each and ditch nick... i love nick but astley and zara are better together
teamastley101 chapter 5 . 3/7/2012
this is really good :) please continue
starrylionheart chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
This was absolutely amazing ! I love the Need Series and I cannot actually wait for endure to come was beautifully written and I hope you upload more because I thoroughly enjoyed it all from the start all the way to the end
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