Reviews for Unbecoming
nbrian72 chapter 13 . 3/5
Azlady2003 chapter 13 . 11/8/2017
Please tell me you will be continuing this story please
onlybelieved chapter 13 . 9/17/2017
it's beyond silly that i still want this to continue. I know. But i do. Please?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2017
Was Jane supposed to be funny? She's disrespectful and rude. Bitch. The way she spoke of Edward was not ok. She should be gutted for being a cunt.
HiraFrance chapter 8 . 6/9/2017
They are all morons for keeping the truth from B...
HiraFrance chapter 7 . 6/9/2017
E is an idiot for not talikng already, argh!
HiraFrance chapter 6 . 6/9/2017
Darn B, why won't she listen E?...
HiraFrance chapter 5 . 6/9/2017
Bella definitely needs help...
Love it, thanks !
HiraFrance chapter 4 . 6/9/2017
I can't wait to find out the reasons behind the Cullen's awful behavior...
I was crying... Aigain, darn you ;)
HiraFrance chapter 3 . 6/9/2017
Do you know i have cry for B? God!
Love your story *mwah*
jk chapter 13 . 5/26/2017
Bella hearing voices and shit? SOOO dumb
jk chapter 11 . 5/26/2017
I don't really understand why their still alive. Eleazor and carmine should be dead...They killed carlisles surprised he didn't shoot them.

And that part about eleazor being drunk? Edward "sneaking" vodka into his drink? That was probably one of the sloppiest written parts. How does one sneak enough vodka into someones drink to get a full grown man drunk? What was he drinking that he didn't notice there was vodka in it? And enough to get drunk at that? Sloppy sloppy
jk chapter 8 . 5/26/2017
I KNEW it was gonna be an outside threat...and I also KNEW that it couldn't possibly explain why he would leave his pregnant wife...HA it really is Edward fault their baby is black belt left a 100 pound woman to fend for herself while he skipped town with his family...WOW What a huge piece of shit...I hope bella sees what I see, this is Edwards fault.
jk chapter 6 . 5/26/2017
I really wonder how you going to explain Edwards behavior. I'm sure its gonna be some kind of outside threat...yet I'm already tearing it apart in my head...because if the cullens could be together then why not bella too? Esme didn't leave her husband, jasper didn't break up with who the fuck ever, Edward didn't suddenly decide "to break" up with his parents. They ONLY let go of bella, so I'm really curious as to how that will be already feeling like whatever it is it wont be enough.
And in chapter 6 I can feel bella giving in...thinking about kissing him and whatnot...and I really feel like its WAY too soon for that shit. Actually I feel like bella should hate him...and I don't mean pretend to hate him but really love him...I mean hate him, done to her fucking core, HATE HIM. And if anything is to happen she would have to fall for him all over again, start from scratch type shit. And I only see that happening if he has a REALLY good reason for leaving her without explanation while she was fucking pregnant.
RubysQuill chapter 13 . 5/7/2017
I do hope that one day you choose to finish this story or at least post an outline of how it would have ended...
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