|Reviews for Unbecoming|
| ArekWhitlock chapter 13 . 6/29/2012
| vvply01 chapter 13 . 6/28/2012
I've wanted to read this story for sometime, I finally did and wow what a story. Love Mrs Bishop. You need a better summary though. How many chapters left? Has Bella lost her mind? Will she be able to forgive Edward and the rest of the Cullens? Did Carmen kill Eleazar? Oh so many questions I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing this amazing story. Take care
| trixiecookie38 chapter 13 . 6/26/2012
when if ever are you going to update again? i have been anxiously waiting for it since it has been over a month since your last update.. love this story
| pipelynn chapter 13 . 6/26/2012
i just read this all the way through starting last night and am crazy about this story! so so good...ok, here are a few rec's:
rochelle allison's witfits brighter,appease
fiercest sun by bitemenowplease
coming home by sarge's girls
if he would have been faithful by beegurl13
| pipelynn chapter 12 . 6/26/2012
so glad to see them fighting back and taking action. hope edward did not get shot. poor bella has been through enough!
| pipelynn chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
I am madly in love with Mrs. Bishop! such a great character! fabulous. cant figure out the guy that follows edward and gives him whiskey and advice?
| pipelynn chapter 10 . 6/26/2012
OMG about Ben. shit. really glad they are talking and all the pieces are coming together...
| pipelynn chapter 9 . 6/26/2012
OMG this is crazy good! love all the mystery and that the cullens arent bad afterall... CRAZY!
| pipelynn chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
oh wow that was rough. just terrible...
| pipelynn chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
I'm not a big angst lover unless it's sprinkled with breaks of light and this is perfect. Is it crazy I feel bad for Edward too? He's so tormented. Hate that Bella feels worthless...
| pipelynn chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
Oh my goodness. Cannot wait to find out what is really going on and what's going on with blocking her going back to Africa!
| pipelynn chapter 3 . 6/25/2012
Love this story I am hooked!
| pipelynn chapter 2 . 6/25/2012
Ok this is heartbreaking! I cried about the school and the sign in the yard. Ugh...
| obssd-reader chapter 13 . 6/25/2012
Awe, I just found your story and I'm immediately hooked. Great fic, I need more. I love how detailed your chapters are, and they are nice and long. Ha!
Thanks for sharing, can't wait for more.
| cheshirekat516 chapter 13 . 6/25/2012
This fic is absolutely captivating. I found via a community and had to read it in one shot. I couldn't even write a review per chapter (which it deserved) because I had to hit the button to go to the next chapter so fast. The story is just amazingly written, the plot drags you in and the characters pull you into their heads with their actions, words and thoughts. I can't wait for the next chapter and promise to revie each one as it comes and I'm certain they'll all be glowing. Thanks for writing this!