|Reviews for Unbecoming|
| MessyMoose chapter 2 . 7/21/2012
| divyvicki chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I didn't record who recommended this story to me but it seems as though it is going to be a good one. I can't wait to read more of it.
| MessyMoose chapter 1 . 7/20/2012
Finally reading your story. Look forward to reading more.
| Lona W. Hall chapter 13 . 7/10/2012
Wow...this is quite the story! From the summary, I pictured a kinda hurt bunji jumping Bella and a surfer dude type Edward. This is so much more than that! Very sad...and a very original plot. Interested to see where this goes.
| smook chapter 12 . 7/3/2012
How's this GREAT story of yours coming along? They were wondering about it on Facebook page I belong to, and I thought I'd check in. Happy 4th if you are in USA! Susie
| OVER-bridges chapter 13 . 7/3/2012
Thanks for keeping me interested at all times. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| ArekWhitlock chapter 13 . 6/29/2012
| vvply01 chapter 13 . 6/28/2012
I've wanted to read this story for sometime, I finally did and wow what a story. Love Mrs Bishop. You need a better summary though. How many chapters left? Has Bella lost her mind? Will she be able to forgive Edward and the rest of the Cullens? Did Carmen kill Eleazar? Oh so many questions I am so looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for writing this amazing story. Take care
| trixiecookie38 chapter 13 . 6/26/2012
when if ever are you going to update again? i have been anxiously waiting for it since it has been over a month since your last update.. love this story
| pipelynn chapter 13 . 6/26/2012
i just read this all the way through starting last night and am crazy about this story! so so good...ok, here are a few rec's:
rochelle allison's witfits brighter,appease
fiercest sun by bitemenowplease
coming home by sarge's girls
if he would have been faithful by beegurl13
| pipelynn chapter 12 . 6/26/2012
so glad to see them fighting back and taking action. hope edward did not get shot. poor bella has been through enough!
| pipelynn chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
I am madly in love with Mrs. Bishop! such a great character! fabulous. cant figure out the guy that follows edward and gives him whiskey and advice?
| pipelynn chapter 10 . 6/26/2012
OMG about Ben. shit. really glad they are talking and all the pieces are coming together...
| pipelynn chapter 9 . 6/26/2012
OMG this is crazy good! love all the mystery and that the cullens arent bad afterall... CRAZY!
| pipelynn chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
oh wow that was rough. just terrible...