Reviews for Unbecoming
meleelove chapter 13 . 6/4/2013
This story has me on the edge. I've cried, and I love this Bella so much. I hope you update soon but it seems like this story will never be finished :/. I hope Bella gets well and moves on with her life, and if one day her and Edward cross paths and are in good place in their life's, maybe they can try again. I just don't want her independence to vanish because everything is normal.
You'reMyAlibi chapter 13 . 5/31/2013
I reread this and I fell in love with it again! Please update soon! I really really want to know what happens next! :)
CassandraLowery chapter 13 . 5/21/2013
Really loving this story-I spent all afternoon reading it instead of grading essays. But it was worth it, LOL! :)

Excellent story! Can't wait to see what happens!

xxxooo,
Cassandra :)
CassandraLowery chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
I've met some of the "lost boys"-one came to our library and gave a talk. He was amazing. A lot of them have settled in the San Diego area where I live, and their stories are incredible.

Loving this story-so touching!

Warmly,
Cassandra :)
InMahMind chapter 13 . 5/12/2013
Are you on a hiatus? Please continue this story! It's far to good to abandone!
Sarah Amin chapter 10 . 4/28/2013
Damn , didnt see that one coming .. the cullens have more power and money , why would Ben work for Eleazar when he could take everything from the cullens !
Sarah Amin chapter 9 . 4/28/2013
so instead of working with his wife and protecting her , he left her unprotected knowing there's a crazed psycho after her .. i hate him now even more ..
Sarah Amin chapter 7 . 4/28/2013
even if he has a valid excuse , i still dont see him doing anything other than provoking her and not telling her why he wasnt man enough for her !
Sarah Amin chapter 6 . 4/28/2013
i hate himmmmmm ...
Sarah Amin chapter 5 . 4/28/2013
They're major assholes .. she shouldnt have made jenks release that statement .. since they dont want to respect her and leave her alone they dont deserve the same !
hippie starr chapter 13 . 4/28/2013
I hope this one gets picked back up soon.
Sarah Amin chapter 4 . 4/28/2013
Even if they had some miracle explanation for what they did , nothing excuses them dumping her like that .. They werent just her inlaws , they were her freaking Family !
Sarah Amin chapter 3 . 4/28/2013
so basically the cullens are disgusting inhumane vile people .. First he leaves his wife , pregnant at that , then she's beaten and miscarried and they dont have the decency to call or check on her ..
Sarah Amin chapter 2 . 4/28/2013
somehow i hate him already .. where are his so called parents that raised her since infancy ..
Yin - Yang M chapter 13 . 4/23/2013
Is that guy finally going to tell Bella why he hate her update soon
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