|Reviews for Unbecoming|
| Taylor9901 chapter 13 . 10/27/2013
I wish you would continue this story. I loved it so far.
| ladylibre chapter 13 . 9/27/2013
Okay, so I'm gonna try to be calm here, not make any sudden moves as everybody's all amped up and packin' heat, but er... I mean, that is... YOU JUST GON LEAVE ME HANGING RIGHT THERE? Seriously?
I'm reeeeeeeally hoping there's more somewhere. Otherwise I will not be held responsible for my actions ;-)
| ladylibre chapter 1 . 9/25/2013
Captivated, curious, and clicking NEXT
| lanigirl96003 chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
I see its been a long time since u have updated. But just read this and lovred it I hope that u will updat
| snoopylover60 chapter 13 . 7/30/2013
Given that it has been over a year, I am guessing you are not updating this.
I hope that you do. IT is very riveting!
| Saliset chapter 13 . 7/10/2013
Omg I have just read all 13 chapters. OHMYGOD. The awesomeness of this story.. Damn!
I was sooooo angry at Edward in the beginning haha. And Bella is hilarious, love it!
Keep up the awesome job (not a job but you know what I mean) that you're doing with this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! Loooving this story!
| EdwardLoverForever13 chapter 13 . 7/9/2013
Ahh! You need to continue this story please! I'm so obsessed with it! I need to know whats going on with Bella and whats going to happen with everything! So please! Please continue! I'm begging you!
| fanficlass chapter 4 . 7/5/2013
I am loving this story! Please complete it!
| meleelove chapter 13 . 6/4/2013
This story has me on the edge. I've cried, and I love this Bella so much. I hope you update soon but it seems like this story will never be finished :/. I hope Bella gets well and moves on with her life, and if one day her and Edward cross paths and are in good place in their life's, maybe they can try again. I just don't want her independence to vanish because everything is normal.
| You'reMyAlibi chapter 13 . 5/31/2013
I reread this and I fell in love with it again! Please update soon! I really really want to know what happens next! :)
| CassandraLowery chapter 13 . 5/21/2013
Really loving this story-I spent all afternoon reading it instead of grading essays. But it was worth it, LOL! :)
Excellent story! Can't wait to see what happens!
| CassandraLowery chapter 3 . 5/21/2013
I've met some of the "lost boys"-one came to our library and gave a talk. He was amazing. A lot of them have settled in the San Diego area where I live, and their stories are incredible.
Loving this story-so touching!
| InMahMind chapter 13 . 5/12/2013
Are you on a hiatus? Please continue this story! It's far to good to abandone!
| Sarah Amin chapter 10 . 4/28/2013
Damn , didnt see that one coming .. the cullens have more power and money , why would Ben work for Eleazar when he could take everything from the cullens !
| Sarah Amin chapter 9 . 4/28/2013
so instead of working with his wife and protecting her , he left her unprotected knowing there's a crazed psycho after her .. i hate him now even more ..