|Reviews for Blurring Boundaries|
| Qinlongfei chapter 16 . 3/5
Finally finished reading all 16 chapters, you are not kidding when you said things pick up after chapter 6 and it becomes much easier for me to read after the plot start to pick up and I'm definitely waiting for the next chapter with anticipation.
One small question though, why didn't Daisuke just make Veemon evolve in chapter 16 when he's falling.
| KHLostEmpress chapter 16 . 3/1
Im sure there were other important bits in the chapter but im pretty much focused on how adorable the Takari was. I think you did an excellent job on the action and romance.
| Broken Angel01 chapter 16 . 2/28
Aw, I loved this chapter! And although I loved the whole chapter, I really loved that moment between T.K. and Kari. It was a really nice Takari moment, and I thought it was perfect! It was sweet and it felt very natural, and best of all it wasn't overdone. You did an awesome job with them, and it had me smiling!
But now I'm all worried about Davis and Veemon! I really hope they're going to be okay!
Excellent job as usual with this chapter, and what an great ending for it. I will be looking forward to the next one!
| Fallen-Angels01 chapter 3 . 2/26
Man, poor Takeru. But I do enjoy the Yamato and Takeru bonding but I hope he feels better soon. I also feel bad cause Yamato is on his own. If only he had Sora or someone to comfort him (sorry inner Sorato fan peeking) but still, he'll break down himself if he's alone. But I'm sure Takeru will be alright, I really hope so. Please be okay, Takeru! Yamato will go insane if you die or something!
| Fallen-Angels01 chapter 2 . 2/26
I want to hug Yamato! Can I hug him? Davis didn't punch that guy enough though *grumbles and glowers at the team member* I also loved the Taichi and Yamato best friend moments. They had a sweet and developing friendship in the series which I really liked. You write the character interactions very well and I really enjoy reading them. I feel so sorry seeing Yamato's concern for Takeru. One of my favourite bonds to explore and I know it isn't as easy to write as say Taichi and Hikari, due to Taichi's slightly more open nature.
I really hope Takeru will be okay. I also like the moments between Natsuko/Hiroaki though have they gotten back together? Or is this just like the first adventure? I remember when Yamato and Takeru went to the digital world and the parents were watching them fight, the two of them were holding hands. One of my favorite moments as they're a very cute couple in my opinion.
| Fallen-Angels01 chapter 1 . 2/26
Okay, I loved this chapter. First of all, I have to thank you for having MimixJyou and TakeruxHikari as they are two of my favourite couples but even that didn't catch my attention as much as the friendship displayed. YamatoxTakeru brotherly bonding is something I crave so it was amazing to see Yamato being so open and proud of Takeru doing so well. I agree with Mimi, even his own parents wouldn't be that proud but we know how much Yamato treasures Takeru.
Takeru was doing amazing in that game and I agree, having your friends and family support you is an amazing feeling to have. Awwww poor Daisuke can't play as well as he usually does? Glad it hasn't deflated his spirit though and I was very happy to see Daisuke cheering so much for Takeru. I like it when their friendship is shown in fanfics as it distracts me from all the bashing and everything that a lot of authors do.
I hope to see some more brotherly bonding from Takeru's side though as that's a thing a lot of fanfics fail to explore. They show Yamato caring a lot for Takeru but him not really doing the same. Oh and I have a request which I shouldn't ask before reading the whole fic but can you show some friendship moments between Taichi, Yamato and Daisuke (mostly Yama and Dai) as I feel those pairs don't get enough moments in fanfics. Loving it so far, though concerned for Takeru and hope he'll be alright soon.
| digigirl02 chapter 16 . 2/25
Yay, they finally kissed. I've just discovered this fic and am now hooked.
| RAGA chapter 16 . 2/25
You're back! Hurray!
And seeing you throw in a little Takari makes me happy. Another prophecy? And a cliffhanger with poor Davis. . .
Hope to see more from you soon!
| Shipperboyx chapter 16 . 2/23
Nice to see that this story is back :)
| Digi-fanCapp chapter 16 . 2/23
Well, that's one way to remind everyone why we followed you. Dude, that was intense! I loved this chapter!
| Gummybear chapter 16 . 2/23
I'm so glad you are back!
| kitty chapter 16 . 2/22
let me guess...The prophecy has to be something to do with Percy Jackson series
I love prophecy, i'm sure you can deal it nicely
Great chapter. hope to see the next chapter soon!
| Digidestined Ninja of Sunshine chapter 16 . 2/22
After spending THREE HOURS on a Science presentation, a 54-point Geometry assignment and a Geography paper, finding THIS in my email gave me a very PLEASANT surprise. Literally, you should've seen my face. If my parents weren't asleep right now, I'd be yelling in their faces. Gah, it's been so long. I think I've re-read this a while back because I was in the mood for some good brotherly love and friendship moments, and BOY did that make me mad... I was left waiting for the next chapter all over again!
Don't fret, my friend, because this chapter was fine. :3 Though I'm not the biggest Takari fan out there (I'm a Daikari fan, actually, but I've read a huge share of Takaris, too. Not to mention I enjoyed them), I did enjoy this little read here. Plus, the beginning sort of threw me off, as I was expecting it to be in Kari, Cody, Matt or TK's POV. Seeing Ken's perspective on this, though, was a nice addition. Erm, though you've done it in a previous chapter... I'll just shut up now...
Or not! I still have a few more things to say.
First (erm, I suppose I should say "third") of all, I'd like to say that you've done a great job with this fic overall, and even though it took a while for this chapter to arrive, I am still impressed with your work.
Secondly: I am in LOVE with the way you've captured everyone's relationships. Not the romance, but the overall way they care about their friends and their digimon... ALL DEM FEELS, GURRRL. ALL DEM FEELS!
And thirdly: Damn, that's a huge cliff-hanger. You'd think that the end of the chapter would end at Matt walking in on TK and Kari having their little moment but NOOOO... Poor Davis and Veemon others are falling to their doom! I can feel the tears coming... *sniff*
AAANNNND, lastly: I don't doubt that I'll love the next chapter just as much as I loved this one and all the previous ones... update soon!
| fostine.foli chapter 16 . 2/22
Oh..you finally back...i am waiting for this chapter...XD
And i am happy to wait because the chapter is really worth it...lol...*i loved suspicious genai..digidestinied interaction...takeru and cody talk...and the confession scene...*falling in love again...and also don't forget the apearance of big brother...i loved matt's remark about this new relations...and then you closed it with david's pov...
You really know how to wake up my curiousity and fangirling...lol
*congrats for your decision to become a professional writer...i know how hard to do that...
And last, can't wait to see the next chapter XD
| Luminous chapter 16 . 2/22
Oh may god man!
I'm also a fan of Percy Jackson !
I love them so much especially the Heroes of Olympus series!
I can't wait for The Blood of Olympus coming out !
this is still my favorite story
and you still my NO.1 !