Reviews for The Plan
Guest chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
Pretty good. "al-Saotome" killed me.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2015
Yeck. Just jeck. The story was fine at first but when it got to Kasumi and nabiki , ugh! Rot in hell.
Sdarian chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
Nice. Didn't care much for Akane's confused and confusing instructions for blowing him, but the rest was good.
rayminami chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Good story, very funny.
FandomGeekFan chapter 1 . 7/12/2013
Ranma 12 Review chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Continued, thanks to my damn mouse accidentally clicking "post" before I was ready.

Although, it was decently written. If this is a style of your liking, I won't stop you. But you might want to upgrade your pairings and story ideas to become less porn-like if you want to compare to great fanfiction writers.

Thank you for your time.
Ranma 12 Review chapter 1 . 6/12/2013
Man, I loved this story! It was so erotic!

... I'm sorry, but onto the real review.

First off, I'd like to say, I'm not a big 'RanmaxEveryone' lover. Never have, never will. I have been a strict 'RanmaxAkane' fan from the beginning. If you think it affects my review, you may be well on your way.

Second, I'd also like to say that I freaked out when Kasumi and Nabiki left Akane defenseless to Ranma. I don't mean it in a good way. Later on, I realized that this was just the nature of the fanfiction- but it doesn't push away the fact that it was very, very out of character.

More into the subject of 'out of characterness', I had an extremely hard time believing that Ranma would strip in front of all the Tendo girls, JUST because he promised Kasumi. He would've found a way out, and EMBRACED it. The whole 'Nabiki going bra-less' thing was too way-over-the-top in every way. I could go on and on about this subject, and I will, in this next subject...

Ranma gets married to all three of them?! I'm not much of a face person, but what the fuck? O.o
I know I'm over-the-top, but I can't... I can't do this... Ranma and Akane are stubborn and shy in love. Think, would they want to share their 'goods'? Hell, Ranma fights over food and kills demi-gods! With Akane's jealousy, of course she's just going to share her husband with two other women. Might as well make it a self-centered chef that uses potions or bombs!

meghanmoo chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Oh my I don't know what to say...this story started out almost normal and then took a weird turn but I can't say I hatred it...ooh my God..
Compucles chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Okay, Kasumi and Nabiki are really creepy in this story. First, they manipulate Ranma into raping their sister (oral sex is still sex), and then they seduce their sister's fiancé for themselves.
J Luc Pitard chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Very funny! So that's why a man would marry a wife and her sisters... Yeah, still not digging it in real life. That's what fan fic if for though. Love the humor and Ranma getting a happy ending! Poor chap deserves one.
bosk chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Now if only someone could make a doujinshi out of this. XD
addisonrose12 chapter 1 . 3/8/2012
im still reading! lol . 3 likin it so far! 3
tenchifew chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Hilarious story, great smut.

Very nice oneshot.

Thank you for writing.
TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 2/16/2012
Great job, loved the effort you put into this story.

soulfire524 chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
This was very interesting, but also very weird. I'll also admit, though I have read stories before where there's sorta a harem going on, in Ranma 1/2 I really only like Ranma and Akane together, and not a tribe of females to back her up. I've always loved the how deeply Ranma and Akane's love for each other actually went, but at times wished they were not so insecure so they could express it a little more. I think that, like in your story, sometime someone else might need to intervene and break that ice, though maybe not exactly in that manner.

Your genre says romance/humor, but though it has some humorous bits, there seems to be a lot more LUST than romance and that was the only emotion, other than tired, tense, and anger at the begginning, that you really touched on. I'm not going to put you down for the polygamist marriage at the end their, sometimes its kinda funny, but you have a few kinks in the plot that might have made it more attractive to the reader. Personally I have trouble seeing how any love can be involved in a multiple partner marriage and think that there maybe Lust and possibly affection, but a real romance doesn't stand a chance. However, I try to be open mined, and it was interesting because I read the whole thing and didn't just shake my head and pull out. I was atleast glad Ranma and Akane were together, even if her sister ended up a part of the deal, which they seemed very selfish though and I think the biggest kink is making the story more relatable. And, although I'm not a HUGE fan of this one guy multiple girls he has sex with, even if Kasumi and Nabiki were the ones in control of the situation, I think if you write another story like this there are some things you might need to work on, even if it was just written as a fantasy or arousing piece.I did like how descriptive you were and a person could easily picture what was happening. There was no real confusion, I think you just need to give it a little more soul andmake a few adjustments with the plot and you'll be all set. I still applaude your effort though. Writing is never easy and sometimes it takes a little more courage when you post a more explicit piece.

Oh I wish you luck it making sure your kids do not read this until they are fiftey! ha ha
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