Reviews for Norbury
Writing While I Wander chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
I always loved the 'Norbury' scene in the books, but this is WAY better.
Clairose chapter 1 . 5/29/2013
This is excellent! Very well written and I love the tone of the texts from Sherlock. Great job.
alljuststories chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
That's somewhat cute, in its own way. Just... the idea of Sherlock doing that for Molly. Despite not being a Sherlock/Molly shipper, I have to admit it really is rather sweet. :D
Murmeltierchen chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
i soooooo Love mycroft in this One. i can See him Speeking into the Butterfly! it's brilliant! and the Way Sherlock reacted:

"don't yell at her!" it's sooooo him! couldyouwrite more?
watercolour dreams chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
I liked the pretence of the story, and it was very well written. However, I think if it was longer, more detailed it would captivate the emotions better and created more tension between Molly & Mycroft. What this feels like is a synopsis of what is potentially a greater chapter.

You have their voices, you just need the length to create an intense scene.
mrspencil chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
Neatly done. A bit hard on Molly, but I think you wrote Mycroft very well, and have found a unique perspective on events. Very nice work:-)

Mrs P:-)
jesslovessmiles chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
This is really good. I think you should continue the storyline :D
ImLostForever chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
:'( Poor Molly!
katdemon1895 chapter 1 . 1/25/2012
poor molly, very interesting beginning, cool way for sherlock to stay in the loop of things and curious how oyou'll continue
grossasstoenails chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Hahaha! I love it! Are you doing another chapter?
CallMeSunshine chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Clever Sherlock!
Kissy Fishy chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
I liked that. It was perfectly in character, and I really liked Sherlock's behind the scenes appearance. Very good. I enjoyed it a lot.
TadPole11 chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
I would love to see more of this story. Mycroft and Molly would be a strange pair of friends indeed.