Reviews for While You Were Sleeping
raelynne9 chapter 37 . 4/2
lol idk if u watch criminal minds on a daily basis but tonights episode the one guy basically called jj a lesbian and i instantly thought o this story and emily
StefanieT21 chapter 37 . 3/18
I liked it
StefanieT21 chapter 35 . 3/18
Yay yay yay!
StefanieT21 chapter 34 . 3/18
Uhhh heart breaking...
StefanieT21 chapter 33 . 3/18
Just perfect! Made me tear up a bit
StefanieT21 chapter 30 . 3/18
Looooving it!
Lktwh13 chapter 37 . 3/13
Man, I was saving that last burst of chapters until I had time to read then all together. Totally worth it - those last chapters really made up for that small lag that you mentioned in your A/N. I honestly didn't think they "didn't have a point," (I forget your exact wording), they were just a little different. I appreciate what your learned from writing this tho. I can not wait to read your next fics. Thanks so much for persevering with this one. I know it'll be sticking with me.
bball21 chapter 37 . 3/12
Don't be so hard on urself hon'. I think this story had more substance in those "rough patches" than ur giving urself credit for. Anyways I loved this story from beginning to end, and i'm glad u have another story ready
Guest chapter 37 . 3/12
Yeah I'm sorry but I can't say I liked this story at all. Each chapter seemed to be all over the place. The whole thing was freaking depressing. I honestly can't say there was any part that I liked about this story other than they end up together. I didn't like how Jj just shot down the idea of marriage and kids just like that. I didn't like how things ended with kate. Like really for those two months she didn't think about Emily not even once? I do hope your next story will be happy and more organized than this one. Good luck!
Angelsheart85 chapter 26 . 3/10
this was so... active, I d say... if only people in my life found the way to be as brave as Emily is... I envy JJ now!
Angelsheart85 chapter 25 . 3/10
first of all i believe that truths create those barriers, not secrets...

second of all but more important - wow I again take my hat off to you for such a powerful Emily chapter! I drank every word slowly and greedily ... And right now that you connected her and JJ again, am afraid to proceed with the reading :) but lets be on the way to chapter 26 :)
bball21 chapter 35 . 3/10
YES! THE MOMEMT EVERYONE HAS BEEN WAITING FOR! My heart just swelled.
bball21 chapter 34 . 3/10
They need to be together for ever!
bball21 chapter 33 . 3/10
Oh my godddddd I know I said this last chapter but this story and your writing are absolute perfection. I don't understand how you're able to capture each character's emotions and thoughts and everything about them so flawlessly. I'm in love with your writing...
bball21 chapter 32 . 3/10
Perfection.
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